Reviews For My Nicotin Patch
You must login (register) to review.
Title: Chapter 1

You took a line and did some great exploration with it. I want Miss Parker to be with Jarod but I think she was happy with Thomas. As a smoker trying to quit you got it all right. Good job with the writing and keeping things in structure.

Reviewer: The Miss Parker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/07/15 02:20 am
Title: Chapter 1


this was so sweet. he comparison is great. love it.

thanks for sharing!


Author's Response: Thanks! Am glad u enjoyed it! :-)

Reviewer: ParkersCamp Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/10/10 05:04 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Hi Icaangel!

I really enjoyed the metaphore with cigarets. and of course:  "Slowly, piece by piece, until there’s nothing missing anymore." that was soooo good! 


Author's Response: Thanks a lot Ivyleaf!! Glad you enjoyed it. :-)

Reviewer: Ivyleaf Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 04/10/10 02:17 pm
You must login (register) to review.