Reviews For Held
Title: Held

I really enjoyed this story, because this is something I see MP would do. She wouldn't have to pay for sex, as we all know, but I see her paying for comfort.

Reviewer: Leonie1988 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/11/13 03:22 pm
Title: Held

Great, wish there was more

Reviewer: Janeway Signed [Report This]
Date: 19/04/10 07:07 am
Title: Held

Unusual, yes, but I can see it happening. Parker can pick any guy she wants to have a roll in the hay with (not that she would ever approach hay... :D), but to have someone to hold her?

 Loved the sentiment and Tim's POV.

Reviewer: bloodymary2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14/04/10 05:17 pm
Title: Held

Indeed not what I thought!Hahaha! Liked it a lot. Very intriguing,for I had no idea what her purpose was for calling a call boy if it wasn't for sex.
I wonder which tP-timeline this one might fit in. *pondering*
Made me feel pretty sad and kinda turned my stomach (emotinally,hence the sadness), because how lonely do you have to be in order to PAY someone for holding you through the night on your b-day?!? made me realize how extremely lonely MissP is and that turned my guts I guess. That she cannot allow someone to be that close to her,so she has to pay a stranger for it. Good...paying for sex sounds less "pathetic" (although I don't think she's pathetic at all in this story! just very lonely and in need for human closeness).
Enjoyed this a lot! nice touch to write from the boy's pov.
Although I know that u ususally don't have time to answer ur reviews: Where did that idea actually come from?

Author's Response:

Thanks for the great reviews everyone! I am glad you enjoyed the story!
The idea actually came when I watched an episode of "Damages". One of the main characters this season - which we are supposed to not like because he is working for the villains - is also a very lonely person. So snippets of his personal life and background appear in the episodes. One time, he was with a prostitute and asked her to be allowed to put his head in her lap and for her just to stroke his hair. I found that so endearing that when I watched the show again I had to think about how lonely and in need of human contact he must be. Well, and then the idea for a Pretender fic was immediately in my head. With the point with Miss Parker being that the person to hold her *must* be a total stranger because she doesn't want anyone she knows to get that close and see her weakness.


Reviewer: IceAngel Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14/04/10 03:38 pm
Title: Held

Such a wanderful story!!!

Reviewer: dimana Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 14/04/10 08:29 am
Title: Held

Aww, that was sweet and heartbreaking all at once!  It shows so well what a lonely life Miss P leads.  Well done!  =)

Reviewer: Danielle SmileyFace Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14/04/10 06:31 am
Title: Held

This was a very nice story.  I can see Parker doing this...getting an escort to just 'hold' her.  I wonder how many of us want just be held?  I know I sure do!

Reviewer: Vash Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14/04/10 04:05 am

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