Title: Chapter 1

Oooh, that was very dark and I like it very much. This is begging for a continuation. Where is Parker? What are Jarod's intentions? What will Lyle do now? Nice!

Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm glad that someone as great as you like it. You're right, there should be a continue but i have no idea yet. Thanks!

Reviewer: Mirage Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15/01/10 11:34 am


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