I love this! Their relationship is so complicated and beautiful and Miss Parker trying to fight her feelings just hit so hard. They deserve to be together and I'm glad they got that.
Some of my fav parts:
- Jarod being mesmerized by the fold out bed
- Miss Parker climbing into bed with Jarod and being nervous about it and him holding her
- Cabana boy and body shot
- literally all their smut/making love moments
Reviewer: Linds Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/02/21 05:48 pm
Lovely story. Thank you so much for writing.
Reviewer: Christina Anonymous [Report This]Date: 18/09/13 08:26 am
You fic kept me company these last hours, it was Amazing! I loved every single word, and your descriptions were intense and suggestive. Your Parker is very real, with her doubts and thoughts, and so was your Jarod, sweet and trying to make her let herself go...chapter "fleep" was great, I was stuck on every word of it! And I really appreciated the end. So thank you, 'cause it was worth it!!
Reviewer: missparker87 Signed
[Report This]Date: 09/02/13 12:56 pm
Oh no, the last chapter :( !! But it was a wonderful ending for a wonderful story. Thank you for it and good look for your exams. Although more from you would surely be fantastic . . . :)
Reviewer: Anna Anonymous [Report This]Date: 28/11/09 11:49 am
Well written, I like where and how you have taken this chapter, but mostly I also look forward to seeing more. The emotional exchanges are done well as well as the insights each has about the relationship between them.
Good job. I hope for more soon.
Reviewer: nightowl Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 16/11/09 02:29 am
Thank you sooooooooo much for this wonderful story!! Thanks you for respecting each of the characters so well (especially Parker and she is definitely the harder to nail right I think), for writing a story that easily could have been true in the Pretender world, but mostly thank for the few hours of blissfull happiness I was in while reading :)
Hope you'll write more stories (maybe a sequel of this one?) soon!
Reviewer: Sabrina Anonymous [Report This]Date: 15/11/09 10:40 pm
I'm so glad you found the time to post this beautiful ending, I loved it verrrrry much!!!
I hope you'll write some new wonderful pretender story, because your writing is very exciting, clever and never banal. I really am a great fan of yours.
Congratulations! ( And again, sorry for my english.)
Reviewer: loveyoujar Anonymous [Report This]Date: 07/11/09 10:41 pm
Brilliant Fe, as always. The flow, the atmosphere, the fight, (oh how I love to see P and J fight, love it!) even the ending is perfect. Every chapter has been a real pleasure to read and I hope you will write many more fics. (Please!!!)
Reviewer: Mirage Signed
[Report This]Date: 06/11/09 11:06 am
This was great. I hope you do write another there are so many questions left to answer. Like what will his mother think, what about her littler brother, and will the center go down?
Reviewer: janeway Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 01/11/09 11:00 pm
Hi That was a very good story can't wait for the next chapter.
Reviewer: Katescats Anonymous [Report This]Date: 23/10/09 07:10 am
Aw Fe, another beautifully written chapter. I so needed this today. It's so romantic and that was too cute the way she took his toast. ;-) I am delighted that you are back! Update soon.
Reviewer: Mirage Anonymous [Report This]Date: 13/10/09 09:13 pm
squeeee! lovely! great story.. next chapter please? :)
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 12/10/09 07:36 pm
yet, another great chapter. I enjoy the moments you create between the characters, all their flaws and yet for the two of the it works. You manage to write the moments of discovery and moments of hidden emotions with equal skill.
Great work. I look forward to more.Thank you for sharing your story and your insights.
Reviewer: nightowl Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 10/10/09 06:26 am
Very nice emotional scenes with them. I hope you continue this romantic story soon.
Reviewer: starclipper01 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 10/10/09 02:10 am
WOW!!! Fantastic chapter! You made my day. I love so much your story...it's a great one! Lovely chapter, very well written. You bring Jarod and Parker to life.
I like when the walls around miss Parker's heart start to crumble...well...it's easy when there's Jarod around!
Please, update again soon!!!
Reviewer: loveyoujar Anonymous [Report This]Date: 10/10/09 01:13 am
:) You totally made my day with this chapter! Excellent written and full of emotions! Love it! Please hurry up wih the next chapter!
Reviewer: Anna Anonymous [Report This]Date: 09/10/09 03:56 pm
I really love it. You are making me come back and dont forget about Pretender. I absolutely adore your Miss Parker, she is tough, sensibel and absolutely in character. Keep the good work.
Oh, and the last scene, it was the most romantic thing I read these times.
Reviewer: lucitana Anonymous [Report This]Date: 29/09/09 11:55 pm
please update! i love this story!
Reviewer: Leonie1988 Signed [Report This]Date: 28/09/09 11:15 pm
Lovely chapter Fe. Don't stop now. I'm already looking forward to the next bit.
Reviewer: Mirage Signed [Report This]Date: 22/09/09 12:09 am
Finally your new chapter...it's really really beautiful! I can't wait for more, I hope you'll update soon, I'll be waiting!
Reviewer: loveyoujar Anonymous [Report This]Date: 16/09/09 01:04 am
Yeah! A new chapter! And such a great one! It is definitly my favorite chapter. Can't wait for the next one!!
Reviewer: Anna Anonymous [Report This]Date: 15/09/09 04:37 pm
what a beautiful chapter. can't wait for more
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 15/09/09 03:58 pm
Brillant. Simply Brillant. This is sooo what I needed after a long week. Thanks so much for sharing, I'll be looking forward to your next post! ( PS: Ethan FTW. I adore fics that focus on the great connection between them. To me Miss Parker has one brother and it isn't that fraud Lyle )
Reviewer: SheSailsShips Signed [Report This]Date: 25/08/09 03:19 am
Oh wow! Great chapter Fe. My only complaint is that the chapters are too darn short. Great flow, atmosphere...just perfect.
And I love the chapter end note...hehe.
Reviewer: Mirage Signed [Report This]Date: 21/08/09 05:10 am
