Please update soon! Love it... I hope that the other guy finds someone to love.. since Parker is taken.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 20/11/10 04:50 am
Oh man, killer cliffhanger here! Great story! Couldn't have guessed Lyle was Kenny. A lot of great stories here that desparately needing conclusions or continuations. I'm happy you updated this one. Quite the storyteller and funny dialogue among Parker's close friends. Very true to the character's persona. Good concentration on Parker and Jarod's lives for this round. I was kinda getting tired of Sydney's regrets on so many storylines. Not enough of Angelo's character though since he's also an empath.
Reviewer: electricq Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 13/10/10 12:40 am
If this story was a book, it would be considered quite a page turner! It was nice to have one chapter after another, although I didn't have a chance to read until both chapters were already posted then went back yet another chapter to read 3 in a row. and I couldn't read fast enough! Wonderful plotting and fast moving language that just kept me going as fast as I could!
Great writing and phrasing. It was a joy to read and I can't wait for more.
I want to mention that we have some absolutly wonderful writers on this site. Writers that put some of the pros to shame. And we have beginners that will learn from you! So go get them! and please keep writing.
Reviewer: nightowl Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 11/10/10 03:04 pm
Wow, that was a fast update! It was awesome! I hope Jarod and Parker can have their happy-ending!
Reviewer: Anna Anonymous [Report This]Date: 10/10/10 01:57 pm
