What a nail biter! I am holding my breath in hopes that Jarod saves her. And he will. (Right? Please?) Incredible writing, Miss Shannon.
Reviewer: Mirage Anonymous [Report This]Date: 08/08/10 11:20 pm
Great suspense and a touch of horror to it. The story is again, well written and garnished with enough mazes that any suspense writer would be surprised.
I knew I smelled the centre in it. When there are too many screwy criminals and actions it has to be the centre. I like how you kept to the show's canon. Parker's friends are so typical of what you might expect of friends.... tooo typical? I guess we have to wait and see if there are more bogey men (women) invovled.
Great job! can't wait for more.
Author's Response:
Thanks for your review!
This might be a bit of a spoiler, but Christine does have a secret that will come out in the next two chapters. It might just not be what you think but I've already planted some clues over the past few chapters ;-).
Reviewer: nightowl Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 08/08/10 08:41 pm
Love the momentum of build up in this chapter. It kept me glued.
Reviewer: b18 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 07/08/10 06:39 am
