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Title: Part Ten

I am glad Jarod made it up to Parker. I liked her memory about finding him asleep. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: Anna Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 16/09/09 09:43 am
Title: Part Ten

Okay, I still want to smack Jarod, wish Parker would toss her cookies all over him while he was asleep being the wonderful husband he thought he was.

Your story has the ability to make me angry at one character. can you guess which one? Anytime a storyteller is able to do that, to catch your imagination and give it emotions, has to be good at telling the story. 

So with that in mind I'll try not to write a story where Jarod gets pummeled while sleeping  next to Parker, by Parker.

 Good job, particualarly if you are a fan of the not so great husband type.  ;-)

 

 

Reviewer: nightowl Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16/09/09 05:03 am
Title: Part Ten

Wow! Another great chapter full of suspense and emotions!

I'm eager to find out who's behind the kidnapping and who has the ties in hand!

Thanks for the update!

Reviewer: Whisper Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 15/09/09 10:59 pm
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