Reviews For Into Thin Air
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Title: Part Four

deliciously suspenceful. Great job with the new chapter, your plotting is well done. I was interested in how you developed the character's dispositions and habits. I like that you didn't paint a "now that he has her life is all rosey".  Relationships -friends, lovers, whatever are always work. Work at ignoring those quirky things we all do, or work at adjusting to moods.. you did a good job in describing it by either actions or dialogue.

Hope to be reading the next chapter very soon.

Reviewer: nightowl Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/07/09 11:22 pm
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