Reviews For Into Thin Air
Title: Part Four
Date: 11/07/09 11:22 pm
deliciously suspenceful. Great job with the new chapter, your plotting is well done. I was interested in how you developed the character's dispositions and habits. I like that you didn't paint a "now that he has her life is all rosey". Relationships -friends, lovers, whatever are always work. Work at ignoring those quirky things we all do, or work at adjusting to moods.. you did a good job in describing it by either actions or dialogue.
Hope to be reading the next chapter very soon.
Reviewer: nightowl Anonymous [Report This]Date: 11/07/09 11:22 pm