Great conclusion! This was a favorite that I thought wouldn't get the last chapters. Amusing twist with Sydney & Christine! About time Ms. Parker actually had some close pals who fit right in without changing her character personality.

Hopefully another sequel to this set several years later since Parker's two pals are perfect spinoffs for other storylines.

 I hate to see a good story end. I just want it to go on forever!

Bravo for pulling all your threads together for a perfect ending. You ended it well in every aspect. The story was written well in every aspect! 

Thank you for sharing your wonderul story. One I enjoyed and continually looked forward to. I writing this quickly in case we loose power tonight, at least I managed to get something done!

Please tell me you are working on more!

Please update soon!  Love it... I hope that the other guy finds someone to love.. since Parker is taken.

If this story was a book, it would be considered quite a page turner! It was nice to have one chapter after another, although I didn't have a chance to read until both chapters were already posted then went back yet another chapter to read 3 in a row. and I couldn't read fast enough! Wonderful plotting and fast moving language that just kept me going as fast as I could!

Great writing and phrasing. It was a joy to read and I can't wait for more.

I want to mention that we have some absolutly wonderful writers on this site. Writers that put some of the pros to shame. And we have beginners that will learn from you!  So go get them! and please keep writing.

I am so glad you're back! The chapter was fantastic, I can't wait for more!

please don't let us wait to long. i'm dying^^ it's so exciting!! it's a real thriller ;)

wow that was powerful, and scarey! we are fortunate to have some great writers on this list and you are one of them. The perfection you wrote with and the suspense you ended with are breath catching.

Great job! so Christine is with Sammy and Syd, hmmm more danger awaits or is Christine a good guy. They could use a good guy by now.

 Wonderful story -certainly one peg out of the square.

Great suspense and a touch of horror to it. The story is again, well written and garnished with enough mazes that any suspense writer would be surprised.

I knew I smelled the centre in it. When there are too many screwy criminals and actions it has to be the centre. I like how you kept to the show's canon. Parker's friends are so typical of what you might expect of friends.... tooo typical? I guess we have to wait and see if there are more bogey men (women) invovled. 

Great job! can't wait for more.

Good grief charlie brown, the plot just keeps getting thicker!  hopefully MP will stop her friend before the deed is done! We have yet to find what she was giving MP and with whom she conspired. So many threads unraveling all at once. Good job! The perfect mysteries are those we can't foresee the ending to as we read... and I may be slow but I have no idea how this one is going to work out.

Very good work, thank you for sharing.

You go Broots! Underdog for the win! Thanks for updating quickly and enjoy your vacation.

This one was very good, like all the others, too. I hope I can read the next one as soon as possible! I have to know what will happen to Parker and Jarod.

It was very brave that Broots talked to Jarod this way. But he was right.

Hmmm how sorry are you? This is well done, interesting to write from each characters pov, difficult too.

I still could take a wild swing at Jarod! that guy needs someone to straighten him up big time. He really is coming off as a huge creep for a husband. Mama's boy. Broots could slug him and let him have it just for the dinner crap alone. This is one story that makes me so pissed at a character that is usually sickeninglly well liked I really feel that should I meet "Jarod" in real life I would need to deck him.  And amazingly Parker hasn't. Maybe we need a touch of the old Parker here. 

His family has the nerve and disgrace to bring up a shooting incident (did that really happen?) in front of their child. That alone would make them grandparents from afar. Jarod couldn't see Emily's baiting? man. his family is no better than hers was. 

your story is good, obviously to tick me off like that. I enjoyed the other characters of Parker's friends and find the neighbors and the other guy from the trial weird and suspious.  Good writing. Another edge of your seat chapter. AND YOU ARE NOT SORRY>>> my inner sense tells me so.

So glad you're back, can't wait to see what is going on in the next part!