Hi just read your story it was great.Reviewer: Katescats Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 23/12/13 06:56 am
Best. Crossover. Ever.
I was a little skeptical of the premise and am not a fan of crossovers in general, but holy cow did you knock it out of the park. And a great Pretend and Jarod-justice for the bad guys, not often accomplished in fan fiction. Well done.Reviewer: MarieL Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/11/13 08:05 pm
Quite an undertaking putting this story together. And you did an excellent job. After the first chapter i couldn't stop until I got through it all.
It was well crafted, excellently written, flawless in its delivery, a story that many pros would not have so skillfully written. I've always been a Sci-Fi geek and you totally captured the essence of the Trek domain and that of the Pretender.
My only thought was I wish you had written the Pretender side in a later season, when Parker had mellowed and was actually floundering in her role as a Centre employee and daughter of the Chairman. As the second season persona you captured it perfectly.
Please continue to send us these offereings. This one was totally outstanding. I wish I could give you more stars than they allow.
Why, thank you. You honor me. I had a delightful time writing this story. Its first publication was actually on Facebook. :)
I'm very new to the Pretender; in fact, I'm still only halfway through the fourth season in my first watching. This story was started before I had finished watching the second season, or maybe about halfway through the third season. I think I had a better grasp on the second-season characterizations then. They were incredibly fun to write.
Thanks again for your very kind review.Reviewer: Bucky LaFontaine Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 18/06/09 01:02 am