Good flowing dialogue that carries the story allowing my imagination to fill in the rest when it comes to the scenes. (like on TV.) Good humored approach as well reminding me alot of what that character was like on TV and in person. Makes for good writing material :)
Reviewer: Alex Anonymous [Report This]Date: 08/01/19 09:18 pm
This is an amazing story, I hope you'll continue it someday!
Reviewer: Leonie1988 Signed [Report This]Date: 02/12/13 05:52 pm
Hey, what happens next?!? This is just the start of another sequel or more updates.
A little hard to believe that Matumbo didn't know anything that was going on. I would've thought he'd have spies at the Centre at some point.
Maybe some background history on the hybrid pretender kids, or other super pretenders found from the many kids found.
Reviewer: electricq Anonymous [Report This]Date: 29/03/10 06:33 am
MORE MORE MORE PLEASE!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: New Chapters are now up!
Date: 07/03/09 06:52 pm
I am so glad to see a new interesting chapter!
Author's Response: New Chapters are now up!
Date: 21/01/09 08:32 pm
Great story!!
Love it that Lyle is good and how Parker and Jarod finally got together!! :D
Author's Response: Another chapter is up! Please let me know what you think! Reviewer: Ivi Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 19/01/09 09:12 pm
Great update! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: I put up another chapter. Hope you like it. I am working on more!
Date: 17/01/09 11:30 am
THIS WAS AMAZING. I HAVE READ ALLOT OF THESE AND THIS ONE IS THE BEST. PLEASE PUT MORE
Author's Response: Glad you liked it. I put another chapter up.
Date: 14/01/09 01:52 pm
I really like it! Thank you for this lovely part!!!
Author's Response: Another chapter added. I hope you enjoy reading it as much as I did writing it!
Date: 11/01/09 09:08 am
I love how gentle Ms. Parker was with Jarod in this chapter and I hope to read more soon! Thanks for the update!
Author's Response: Another chapter is up. Please let me know what you think. Feedback is vital!
Date: 11/01/09 08:27 am
Another good one. Thanks for updating so fast!
Author's Response: Another chapter up! More of MP and J. This chapter is rated R.
Date: 09/01/09 06:25 am
Interesting chapter and i hope for more MP and J!Thank you for sharing this fic with us!
Author's Response: Chapter on MP and J just uploaded. I think you're going to like it! Reviewer: dimana Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/01/09 10:20 pm
Thank you for another great chapter.
Author's Response: As the biggest contributer to my reviews I want to thank you. I have kept this story going because Unlike the TV which cancelled the show, I tend to listen when people say they want more. I am having a great time writing this and it makes me feel wonderful to know someone else is enjoying it too. I will keep writing until we have all the answers! (or at least answers I can come up with!) Do you have any questions you'd like me to answer?
Date: 07/01/09 05:23 am
Thank you for the two chapters. Sorry I didn't review the last one. I liked both of them. Can't believe that Lyle is starting to be a nice guy. I'm glad that Miss Parker said that she loved Jarod and Jarod said that he loved Miss Parker. I am glad that you are feeling much better. Can't wait until the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Chapter 10 has just been uploaded. Lyle has a few changes yet to be discovered, but you'll read about a big one here! I have big plans for our major players Parker and Jarod, so hang in there!
Thanks for the well wishes! Keep the feedback coming.
Reviewer: Ann Anonymous [Report This]Date: 06/01/09 05:58 am
Oh, you're redeeming Bobby! I too always wanted him to "get" what they'd done to him and stop playing along. I think this shall prove to be interesting indeed!
glad to hear you're feeling better.
Author's Response:
Kelly, I think you'll be happy with the way things are going for Bobby now.
Chapter 10 will prove very interesting!
Thank you for the well wishes.
Reviewer: Kelly Anonymous [Report This]Date: 06/01/09 05:27 am
Sorry to hear you've been sick and glad to see you must be feeling at least somewhat better!
I'm enjoying the story as well. :) One thing, I believe Sidney is spelled with a Y, "Sydney".
Author's Response: Ellie, you are correct, Sydney is spelled with a Y. I have made the correction for future chapters. I appreciate the feedback. I hope you enjoy the next chapters. Reviewer: Ellie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/01/09 03:21 am
No needs to apologize for you being sick!
Thank you for the updates, and I really love the end of that chapter, lol in front of Broots, poor guy, he's gonna die! lol
What Lyle is plotting?
I wish you a speed recovery!
Author's Response: Thank you for the well wishes. I am much better now. I hope you enjoy the next chapter. I'm sure you'll be surprised about what Lyle is plotting! Don't worry about Broots, he'll be fine...I think. Reviewer: Maria Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 30/12/08 12:09 pm
Another great chapter. Loved it. Can't wait until the next chapter. I hope you feel better.
Author's Response: Another chapter added. Sorry for the delay, but I have been sick since Christmas but I am feeling much better now. I'm just getting back into the swing of things. Hope you like it!
Date: 30/12/08 01:38 am
Thank you for updating this story even if you were sick. Can't wait until you post more.
Author's Response: Another chapter up! Let me know what you think.
Date: 29/12/08 05:36 am
I like this story. Can't wait to see what the scrolls say. I hope that Lyle doesn't find Mr. Parker and hopefully Sydney can call Broots, or Miss Parker to tell them that he can't make it. Please post more soon.
Author's Response: Working off of IOTH and what they told us in fragments of the scrolls. Don't worry about Sidney, I have plans for him, as well as Lyle! More tomorrow!
Date: 27/12/08 01:03 am
Well I'm all for family, but ending there was just cruel! :)
Thoroughly enjoying this; looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Small chapter up. Sorry, I was sick all day yesterday and most of today. I am working on more! Reviewer: Kelli Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 26/12/08 07:25 am
Nice start!!
Can't wait to read the sequel!!
Please post soon!
Author's Response: Sorry about that. I was sick yesterday and a good part of today. It's a small chapter, but I am writing more! Reviewer: Maria Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 25/12/08 01:57 pm