Wow, amazing story and very well written, I couldn't stop reading! I was a bit surprised by the evil Thomas but I enjoyed it anyway. The ending is so satisfying! The Centre bursting into flames... wow!

Just started with this story and again:wow! oh how I love your Parker descriptions! You're able to make her come to "life" like nearly no one else does. Amazing!
Especially liked this part:"She wouldn’t be Miss Parker if she sobbed. She does not. Her shoulder are perfectly still, her body does not move..". you're dead-on she wouldn't be MP if she sobbed. The way how u describe her outfits and everything: just so much fun to read. "The black creature she is...","She smooths the raven hair back with both hands and I can see her blood-red nails disappear and appear again in its mass."...*sighs* I can see her before my eyes...Thanks for that!
Laughed out loud at the "Are u on drugs?" comment. Fact that she doesn't just knocks him out for that one is proof enough that she snapped. ;-)
And loved the part wit her car being parked squarley across Broots' front yard.had a good laugh at that,too. So Miss Parker!hahaha!
can't wait to see what this story has in store for me. (turning over to chapter2)