Reviews For To Make you Smile
Title: Chapter 1

this was amazing!!! loved it how her smile wasn't a real smile at all,but a total MP-fashion cruel/cynical/bitter. Thought from the very beginning that the only smile he could get from her was a dark one that had nothing in common with the intentions he had or the feelings he associted with a smile. Fantastic description of MissP...could just see her before my eyes.wow! Especially the voice-red-wine-metaphor.looooved that. Always am thinking of what that voice reminds me of,and just why I love it so much. Now I have an answer. ;-)
Also got kinda scared for Broots there for a sec and thought "oh no poor Brootsie! don't talk to her like that!...she's gonna rip your techie-head off!!!" Hahaha!enjoyed that a lot! Thanks for posting this.

Reviewer: IceAngel Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/04/10 11:44 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Oh wonderful ficlet! Great characterization, lovely exchange between the two.

Reviewer: middleman Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20/12/08 07:42 pm


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