Yeah! A Gemini-centered piece *does a happy dance*!!!!! and a very good one at that!
In very few words you convey the tension in the SIM lab, Gem's fear, Raines' violent nature, the sweeper's indifference... Thankfully you give us hope at the end! I loved it!
Date: 11/11/08 09:43 am
Nice little piece!
One thing you might want to change for continuity's sake: If Gemini was four in the first section and fourteen in the second, the second section would be ten years later, not fourteen.
Overall, great job. You really made me feel for poor Gem.Reviewer: MP Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/11/08 01:50 am