omg!! I can't even right now
Reviewer: Leese Signed
[Report This]Date: 29/08/22 10:18 pm
Tangled web is spot on.i love how trapped they are by themselves and their own deceiving and deceiving of selves.
Reviewer: Leese Signed [Report This]Date: 29/08/22 10:15 pm
ooh oh dear lordt he knows her so well and that means knowing how best to love her and how best to hurt her and I think I've always wanted to read this and all this time it's been written and I didn't know it had been written here in this story but it was here but I was too scared to read it. this is so complicated and so brilliant.
Reviewer: Leese Signed [Report This]Date: 29/08/22 10:11 pm
oooh wow when Jarod gets that way my guts feel all weird
Reviewer: Leese Signed [Report This]Date: 29/08/22 10:05 pm
This scene between Sydney and Jarod should have happened in the DVDs ages ago. But Jarod suppresses... and suppressing can lead exactly to all that has happened in this story. Can't stop singing your praises. This is so damn good and necessary to write.
Reviewer: Leese Signed [Report This]Date: 29/08/22 09:47 pm
oomph that last line... sums up their entire lives
Reviewer: Leese Signed [Report This]Date: 29/08/22 09:37 pm
Ooh oh! This is something else a victim will do. They do a lot of compartmentalizing and self-destructive things. So accurate. Scarily accurate. So brilliantly written.
Reviewer: Leese Signed [Report This]Date: 29/08/22 09:30 pm
Fanning self. He's a bad boy. Drugs or not he raped her, and I think this shows how it would be in those situations where there were feelings and love also demonstrates how a victim would have to survive when the rapist is still in their life. I knew someone who shared custody with a rapist. She lived in one of those backwards red states and wasn't allowed to have an abortion and she loved the person before he did that to her. They would get together and always break up again. It was really like she was abusing herself to be with him, punishing herself really. It became too much for her and she ended it all... her life. This novel you wrote makes me think of the girl I knew in so many ways. This happens. It happens more than people want to think it happens. You do an amazing job not only giving this attention but in writing all of the detaiils. I'm worried about how it will end but I'm gonna read it all.
Reviewer: Leese Signed [Report This]Date: 29/08/22 09:20 pm
oooh but lord those two have all the heat between them no matter how bad they are for each other and no matter how dangerous Jarod can be and is. I see the appeal. I love this. You just wrote something that needed to be written, showed everyone that anyone can take a bad turn. Did you get a lot of hate for this back when you first posted it? Ignorant people who like to see the world thru rose colored glasses hate what they don't understand and hate truths and you tell alot of truth in your stories. Please never stop writing.
Reviewer: Leese Signed [Report This]Date: 29/08/22 09:11 pm
"forget what I said the fish are already scared" lol 😂 I love Parker's wit and always have. Amazing 🤩😍
Reviewer: Leese Signed [Report This]Date: 29/08/22 07:29 pm
ohh poor Parker.. to have feelings for someone like that and then that person you have feelings for hurts you that way.... that's gotta be hard. You write it realistically and hold my attention and I love how in character they always are when you write them. I love Parker's strength that you show again no matter how much she hurts she will fake it till she makes it just like the rest of us... "I know my way home, Jarod."
Reviewer: Leese Signed [Report This]Date: 29/08/22 05:10 pm
I really never thought about that....how he doesn't know who he is but keeps pretending to be someone he isn't. people who don't know who they are shouldn't pretend to be a different person.. what he does is self destructive and crazy .never thought I'd say I hope Lyle will be ok but I hope Lyle will be ok this is so much action and excitement and I was chewing a fingernail... I'm so addicted to this.
Reviewer: Leese Signed [Report This]Date: 29/08/22 05:04 pm
Like I said I love this.
Reviewer: Leese Signed [Report This]Date: 29/08/22 04:59 pm
I believe he would continue interfering and trying to fix what he broke. He doesn't take a hint from those on the DVDs I have either. This is scary.... mostly because it's plausible. I wish I didn't have to work.
Reviewer: Leese Signed [Report This]Date: 29/08/22 05:19 am
Oh ohh Parker is giving Jarod a taste of his catch-me-if-you-can medicine. I love that you did this!!
Reviewer: Leese Signed [Report This]Date: 29/08/22 05:15 am
ooohhhh oh my wowws I was so afraid of this but it's so well done. squeeee!
Reviewer: Leese Signed [Report This]Date: 28/08/22 07:59 pm
I'm worried that the price Jarod names for his stolen life will be Parker..omg. This is so amazing 🤩😍
Reviewer: Leese Signed [Report This]Date: 28/08/22 07:49 pm
OH MY GODDESSES!!
"can't believe I'd give you a loaded gun" ohhh damn.
OMG I love how protective Broots is trying to protect her from hearing Jarod. I've never read an eviljarod until you and I've been scared to read it but this is plausible and Jarod got darker with each Pretender episode imo so I can see this. I'm glad you wrote it and glad I'm reading it.
Reviewer: Leese Signed [Report This]Date: 28/08/22 01:20 am
Omg so he has gone darkside.. I read this with my heart in my throat thinking Jarod would kill her. He did worse. Ohhh but it's so brilliantly written and executed and I could see it like being there. Want more!!
Reviewer: Leese Signed [Report This]Date: 28/08/22 12:40 am
That was..,..... it was too terrifying and hot. He could still be good right? The writing is 🤩 amazing as always.
Reviewer: Leese Signed [Report This]Date: 27/08/22 08:49 pm
I'm on the edge of my seat and about to fall. Jarod is lying isn't he?
Reviewer: Leese Signed [Report This]Date: 27/08/22 08:46 pm
omg so Jarod isn't going to be good this time ? usually the centre's suspicions are wrong when he acts like an addict or thief. scary if Lyle is right. I love the figure 8 infinity things you add to the chapters.. and I love the mystery and the way you write..
Reviewer: Leese Signed [Report This]Date: 27/08/22 08:41 pm
So far it seems like Jarod is trying to double cross Raines and make them think he's on Raines side and probably didn't mean for Syd and broots to find out. I love this so far. Parker's nightmares are making me scared.
Reviewer: Leese Signed [Report This]Date: 27/08/22 05:08 am
I honestly still don't see anything terrifying or dark yet. I'm proceeding with caution. So far I'm loving this.
Reviewer: Leese Signed [Report This]Date: 27/08/22 04:57 am
It's still a typical Pretender episode and I love their dialog and lines like that last sentence. Everyone is in character and it's all well crafted.
Reviewer: Leese Signed [Report This]Date: 27/08/22 04:54 am
