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Title: Chance of Rain

uhuh, You must continue this and oh please let the little guy live. You've wrote him so well as you have all the charactes. This fic has been such a treat. I saw no typos, not pretending.

Author's Response: Thanks

Reviewer: eva Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17/03/10 07:44 am
Title: Chance of Rain

Amazing. I too have read this from the beginning, have been hanging on the edge of my seat waiting for each update. I love how consistently perfect each chapter is. It;s just the quality of writing I've come to expect from you, every chapter as good, exciting, and professional as the first. Still my fav. fic! Thank you and please update soon.

Author's Response:

Hello Daria, sorry about now responding sooner. As I said, roomies borrowed the laptop...long story. I'm speechles really but I'm glad you've enjoyed the story and hope you continue to do so.

Thanks so much!

Reviewer: Daria Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17/03/10 05:22 am
Title: Chance of Rain

Heart in mouth suspense, nicely worded to get a true feeling of urgency and of the frozen fear of Miss Parker. Very well done. Your writing is crisp and it does put you in the moment with the characters.

 

The Long and Short of it... here are my thoughts. Write it your way. Long chapters are fine with me! If that is how you write the reader can always come back and pick up where they left off, I can't tear myself away so that isn't my problem. I tend to write long chapters because sometimes you just can't break them without changing or messing with your storyline. It is your story do it your way! 

One thing I beg of you, it is a wonderful story, you are writing at a great pace --- PLEASE- PLEASE don't rush the ending! I've read very long stories and it seemed the author got tired of it or felt it was running too long so they finished it in an abrupt manner.  When you get to that ending you just deflate because it just ended without allowing the reader to (in a sense) say goodbye to the story, the characters. A good story allows you to finish and close the book and think Great story. I'm glad I read it. It was worth the time and all the emotions that I invested in reading it. 

Your writing does that for me. I feel as though my time and emotions are well invested I've enjoyed your writing and the skill you have used in weaving it together.  Continue to do it your way and don't worry about the length or if you still have readers, I'm pretty sure you do! At least one is going to stay with it the entire way through! If they leave now, well... I can tell you they won't be reading my story! lol. (ps thank you for the encouragement I am working on the next chapter)

Thank you for sharing your skill and time. Please continue.

 



Author's Response:

Hi Nightowl, I'm taking your advice and not rushing the ending. Wise of you, and thanks for the encouragement and support. I would have pushed these thougts aside and never written a single word if not for the reviews, your reviews had much to do with my continuing this monstrosity. Thank you..

Can't wait to read your next chapter...

Reviewer: nightowl Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15/03/10 04:29 am
Title: Chance of Rain

you've been beautiful also mirage lol. I've enjoyed this from start to uh um almost finsih ? lol and I think I know whats coming next for once. you have nailled the charcters, all of them, something a lot of writers don't do well and i love this pycschological thriller part mystery part hurt-comfort all fab story more and please soon.

Reviewer: kelli Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15/03/10 01:01 am
Title: Stormfront

more, more, more please. I love this fic, and chance of rain? yep big chance, I cried so much. please let Zach get better and PLEASE update this incredible story soon.

Reviewer: tpfan Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/03/10 09:08 am
Title: Stormfront

Sniffs big, blows nose. you'r killing me but in a good way. I don't cry EVER but omg, you make me cry. in the chapter where Jarod confronts Sydney and others and this one as well. I agree, just tell the story no matter how long it ends up being. I have never read anything like this, so perfect, so Parker and Jarod and gang. It's wonderful and I don't ever want it to end!

Reviewer: Remy09 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/03/10 09:44 pm
Title: Stormfront

Once again, I'm fascinated by your ability to weave such a stunning and yes, at times, a very heartbreaking story indeed. An addicting one as well. I hope young Zach survives. Please. I also still hold out hope for a happy ending. Thanks for this brilliant story and please update when you can.

Reviewer: Miss Ice Queen Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/03/10 09:04 pm
Title: Chance of Rain

You really made me cry! Poor Parker after every happy moment she has to expect new tragedy! Please, please let her be happy at the end! And thank you/again/ for great story!

Reviewer: dimana Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/03/10 02:42 pm
Title: Cacophony

Very well done as usual. you leave a trail then cover it up and leave a different trail, wonderfully suspenseful. Your dialoge is well done, your interactions are great. The characters are fully developed and as I remember them from the series!

I have to say you are doing a tremendous job. Good work!

again with the queen of typos.. NO I'm the queen! lol. Truly I didn't catch one, but then I probably wouldn't since I seem to miss all typos unless they scream typo.

 

 



Author's Response: Thank you so much for all the support, I just hope this monster fic can live up to the reviews, the ending is still up in the air. And no, you don't have any typos. Your fic is brilliant and I am so looking forward to reading the next chapter. Thanks again nightowl!

Reviewer: nightowl Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20/02/10 05:17 am
Title: Cacophony

Oh man, Mirage. This fic has totally floored me! Absolutely nothing compares. So many twists and turns, so much character development and not-development...I am sitting on the edge of my seat waiting to find out how it all ends!!



Author's Response: Hi fe, I'm kind of still curious about the end myself, it can end so many ways...ah, what to do? What to do? Thanks for R & R!

Reviewer: fe Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20/02/10 01:19 am
Title: Cacophony

I have followed this story from the beginning. I love it, maybe they deserve a " non tragic " ending! Keep up the great stories.  Thank you 



Author's Response: Hi Debra, I'm glad you're still with the story, wow, thanks so much!

Reviewer: Debra Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 19/02/10 02:46 am
Title: Cacophony

Wow every time i think the end is near you write something like this/briliant and confusing! This part was so worth the wait!!!

Author's Response: Thanks so much dimana!

Reviewer: dimana Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 18/02/10 06:43 pm
Title: Coming Clean

What a roller-coaster ride throughout the story! So many plots and so many more storylines! You gotta continue this! This is very good!  Hope you update or add a sequel.

 



Author's Response: Thank you so much!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/02/10 12:54 am
Title: Stormfront

Fascinating! I've just read this entire fic and it's rather impressive. I do enjoy the darker side of Jarod and even the more human side which you've given him, all while keeping him and Miss Parker and everyone else in character. Your original characters are great as well, as good as the creators of the show came up with. Please continue.

Author's Response: *speechless* I still haven't read this fic in its entirety, so that's quite impressive. I'm glad you enjoyed the darker side of wonder rat. I'm relieved that you think I kept them in character, wow, I don't what to say. Just, thanks so much. I will try to continue but I will never live up to the reviews.

Reviewer: Miss Ice Queen Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/01/10 09:00 am
Title: Coming Clean

I am just so addicted to this story. The characters are so complex and you've developed them perfectly throughout this epic fic. Loved MP's slip of the tongue when discussing merits (or lack thereof) of marriage, her internalised breakdown at the prospect of cleaning and her attempt to reach out to Jarod but not quite knowing how...I just want more! And very soon!

Well done!



Author's Response:

Hi fe, these reviews are better than my story!! :-) (Seriously)

You will get more and hopefully soon. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: fe Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20/01/10 01:17 am
Title: Stormfront

Well Done! Love the way you move them forward despite what has happened (which was the Centre's fault and is very plausible) and being a woman of strength, she wouldn't blame him, being a little self destruction, she would blame herself. Hurt/comfort, drama, romance, thriller...wish I'd thought of it.

Author's Response:

Hi PA, I wish you had thought of it, it's taken over my life. ;-) I wasn't intentionally trying to write a thriller or romance, I'm not sure what I was attempting when this all began but I'm glad you like it. Thanks for R&R!

Reviewer: PA Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19/01/10 10:41 pm
Title: Coming Clean

Great job. You have an interesting take on the relationship, one that I love to read. Your story telling skils draw me your work again and again.

I've always felt that fanfic writers could have done such a good job continuing the series, your stories would have been right up there. 

Good use of phrasing, dialog and not giving the story away.

 I look forward to more as always!! Never quit writing.

 

 



Author's Response:

Hi Nightowl, wow, I don't know about my stories being up there, but there are some amazing stories on this site. *Yours being one of them.

I'm afraid I have not and will not live up to all of the wonderful reviews but I appreciate the feedback just the same. Thanks so much for reading and for the review.

Reviewer: nightowl Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19/01/10 03:59 am
Title: Coming Clean

"Life wasn't perfect.It was life after all." I like this line and your fic is very close to perfect!

Author's Response: Glad you like it! Thanks so much dimana!

Reviewer: dimana Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 18/01/10 08:16 pm
Title: Stormfront

I need more more more and fast fast fast. I know people are reading but like me don't always have time to review. Don't let it end here. Love your fics!

Author's Response:

Hi Jade, umm, I don't know if anyone else is reading or not but I have not left a fic lonely, neglected, cold and shivering in a dark corner just yet. I am currently in the process of doubting myself (a regular habit of mine) but when the self loathing passes, I will update. ;-) There are some very talented authors so go check out another fic while you wait.

Thanks!

Reviewer: Jade Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/01/10 08:53 am
Title: If At First You Don't Succeed

AHHHHHHHH!!! I can't even write a coherent review after reading this chapter. Keep it up, I can't get enough of this fic!

Author's Response: Will do Fe. I hope to read more from you *hint hint* and real soon. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: fe Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/01/10 12:46 pm
Title: Stormfront

I think this is wonderful Christmas present for every Miss Parker and Jarod fan! My engish is not good enough to tell you how much i like your fic , I wish you Happy holidays !!!

Author's Response: Thank you dimana, oh your english is great, it's great :-) And thank you for the holiday greetings. I hope you Holidays were perfect!  Thanks again for r and r.

Reviewer: dimana Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 22/12/09 09:11 am
Title: If At First You Don't Succeed

BRAVO!! well done. The give and take in the Parker/Jarod relationship is interestingly told. We all know it is complicated because both parties are complicated but you let them play it out for us to see how it may be.

The great thing about fanfiction is that no one way is right, so we all get to tinker. You did an excellent job making your version seem very possible and plausable. You kept the characters in the skins we have know them as, and still did a very skillful job in moving the relationship. 

 A nice long chapter but well done. And please even though I have posted for a long time... I am still the typo queen! lol. I found none, but I'd hardly be the person that would. in the real world that is what editors are for, so don't worry about that just keep writing! Please ;-)

 

 



Author's Response:

Thanks nightowl. I'm trying, it's all I can do. I really want to read more of YOUR story. Please. I'm going to skip  on over and leave you a review! Again! But yes, I totally agree, no one way is the way it's supposed to be..."we change the story and the ending is up to us- to sort of quote Mr. Wonder Rat himself. I keep thinking up all the ways it could end and I love to read other fics, other views on how it could end. Oh no, I'm the typo queen....:-) Thanks for reading and reviewing. - those reviews make me want to write faster. 

Reviewer: nightowl Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/12/09 05:13 am
Title: Stormfront

Well, that was GREAT for me. Amazing job and for someone who claims to be not so good at the sex stuff, you surely wrote one hell of steamy hot scene. I had to take a cold shower. Twas a sweet little moment of surrender there in Miss P's on way of course. Please update soon.

Author's Response: Well thanks...I think. A very little moment of surrender but hey, it's Miss Parker, our beloved ice queen, I don't want her to be too soft..but yeah, it's getting there I'm afraid. Thanks Remy09. The update is in the works.

Reviewer: Remy09 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/12/09 04:08 am
Title: When It All Unravels

Sorry for taking so long, but you know I reread before commenting and you have quite a bit to reread! each time I find more that I like, phrases, dialogue, descriptions and character intereactions.

You always take the more difficult plot directions or at least the ones I would be less likely to find, but you do it well. Good job.

Please continue to share your writing skills with us. i hope to have more time to enjoy them.



Author's Response: Hi nightowl, oh yes, it is a bit to re-read..whew. I've been correcting typos for a months! ;-)  I really appreciate every review. Your support has been unwavering and amaziing. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: nightowl Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/12/09 04:58 am
Title: When It All Unravels

Fantastic chapter! I am glad they are .. .. what ever they are just now. . .  In eachothers arms:)! Update please!

Author's Response: Thank you so much. The update is coming.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 29/11/09 07:01 pm
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