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Title: Prologue

 i love the title.  given "bobby's upbringing seems to settle the debate between nature and nurture - particularly since miss p didn't turn out so crazy evil like him.

great to see new authors publishing.  very nice start.  makes me want to read more, so get going and don't make us wait too long.

btw - better go back in there and change "corporation" to "cooperation"  it makes your beta look bad.  lol 

 

Reviewer: terra Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 26/10/08 06:32 am
Title: Prologue

I am intrigued, in a good way, I'd like to read more. The tone of this piece reminds me of the beginning of each pretender episode :  "there are pretenders among us....." can't see it going down well for a long story but in a short chapter like this, it does work rather like a prelude...

Reviewer: middleman Signed [Report This]
Date: 15/10/08 07:02 pm
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