Would be nice to see this continued, was great!Reviewer: Jade Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 26/05/11 08:33 pm
I already sang your praises for this over at Live Journal, but the praise bears repeating here. EXCELLENT job getting in Lyle's head (and what a scary, yet intriguing, place to be)! I'd love to read more of this... *hint, hint*Reviewer: Taryn Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/09/08 08:25 pm
I must admit this was a very good story! Highly believable in an odd way.....I have to say I am impressed. I have to say I would definately read a continuation of this story....that is...if you actually do one! All in all.....BRAVO!!Reviewer: AtlantianDream Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 31/08/08 06:30 pm
Great job on this piece! Lyle is a tough character to write for. Way too often (in fanfic and the series) he came off as the one-dimensional sociopath, which didn't make sense considering his complicated back story. It's great to see someone do him justice.
I'd never really thought about how Lyle would react to the post IOTH Centre. This self-destruct makes a lot of sense considering how the life he'd ecked out sort of came crashing down. I liked the part about how he hadn't been sober enough to eat his secretary.
I'm also a House fan with great appreciation for Cuddy. Wonder how the whole thing felt from her perspective?
Overall, great job!Reviewer: MP Signed [Report This]
Date: 31/08/08 05:40 am
*cuddles poor shattered Lyle* This was very well written. A really nice humanized Lyle of what could be after IoTH with the scrolls going poof... all Lyle ever worked towards, vanishing. Excellent job, but I wouldn't expect anything less from you :) *cuddles Lyle some more*Reviewer: Thunderchild Signed [Report This]
Date: 30/08/08 07:36 am