Very well written story! Loved all the twists and turns that kept me guessing and on the edge of my seat (and up way past my bedtime ;). I thought for sure Miss P would adopt Amanda, though!
Reviewer: Danielle SmileyFace Signed [Report This]Date: 28/04/10 08:27 pm
Just the right mix within a plot. Another possible pretender series story. This was very good!
Reviewer: electricq Anonymous [Report This]Date: 04/12/09 01:28 am
Great ending!
I realy liked the fact that Mr Parker showed his true feelings towards his daughter and set her free and that that freedom came with a cost.
I'm looking forward to reading your new story!
Reviewer: whisper Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 17/06/09 03:37 pm
A great ending to a wonderful story. Thank you!
Reviewer: Quita Anonymous [Report This]Date: 17/06/09 06:58 am
LOVED IT!! it's beautifully written, and I just love it when there's a happy ending, without it being a 'everyone-is-free-and-happy' ending! Same goes for the relationship between our two favourite characters!!! Wonderful story! Do you have another one going?
Reviewer: Faith Parker Signed [Report This]Date: 16/06/09 09:02 pm
Hi Shannon,
Thank you so much for this story. For months it has been my favorite one, couldn't wait for new chapters. I don't think I have ever checked this website more often than these last couple of months. You wouldn't happen to have any more story-idea's up your sleeve, would you?
xxx
Lianne
Author's Response:
Dear Lianne,
thank you so much! Hearing that makes me very happy indeed! :-D
And I have already finished the first chapter of my new story "Into thin Air" which is a sequel to "Vanished". I will post it soon. Hope you will enjoy that story, too.
Cheers,
Shannon
Reviewer: Lianne Anonymous [Report This]Date: 16/06/09 07:15 pm