Uh oh! So much for only reading one chapter before bed again! Haha =) I love where Jarod and Miss P's relationship is going.
Reviewer: Danielle SmileyFace Signed [Report This]Date: 28/04/10 07:55 am
This is a wonderful story - I love the complicated inter-action between Jarod and Miss P - absolutely great!!!!!
Reviewer: Phoebe Anonymous [Report This]Date: 17/11/08 08:45 pm
Very well written, nice mixture of suspense, mystery and characer interaction... but I hate cliffhangers! and you have quite the cliff hanger at the end of this chapter.
As I swing in the wind, I'll look forward to your next chapter. Just don't let me "hanging" for long please.
Reviewer: nightowl Signed [Report This]
Date: 17/11/08 07:45 pm
I hope the girl isn't dead. Some minor mechanical errors, but the rest is fine. Awaiting another chapter!
Reviewer: anamchara Anonymous [Report This]Date: 16/11/08 11:09 pm
Oh I love this story! I hope you update soon!
Reviewer: Quita Anonymous [Report This]Date: 16/11/08 10:38 pm