This was my first ten. I've read dozen of stories, but yours is my fave! This fanfic was amazing. Well written, great storyline and lovely dialogues. I loved the way you portrayed Jarod's flaws and the way you described Miss Parker feelings. I really appreciated, thanks thank thanks!
Reviewer: missparker87 Signed
[Report This]Date: 13/11/12 09:35 pm
"Miss Parker wasn't one to scream girlishly, but being caught so completely off guard, she winced and gave a yelp of surprise when her eyes flew open and found Jarod sitting next to the tub, a smug smile on his face."- I love that! It's so Miss Parker. =) Love the MP-J interactions. Great start to the story, I look forward to reading the rest. =)
Reviewer: Danielle SmileyFace Signed [Report This]Date: 23/04/10 06:44 am
I loved this story! It was so great, from the beginning to the end. well done. :)
Thank you.
Reviewer: MissCatherine Anonymous [Report This]Date: 24/06/09 11:18 pm
I loved this new chapter, but now you HAVE to post more really soon.....Pleeeaaaase! Bye
Reviewer: loveyoujar Anonymous [Report This]Date: 14/04/09 01:52 am
Great story!! thanks a lot! I can't wait to see the next chapter, please update soon...
Reviewer: Coco Signed [Report This]Date: 09/02/09 04:39 pm
Wow this is an awesome story I really like it, even if I'm not a fan of angst I can't help but torture myself, your story is really well written :D
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 06/02/09 10:03 pm
Wow! I loved this chapter! Great work ...Keep writing!
Reviewer: Phoebe Anonymous [Report This]Date: 18/12/08 07:27 pm
Ooooh I like it! I really like the atmosphere of this first chapter, the warmth and intimacy inside the house contrasting with the rolling thunder outside... Impressive how you managed to create a very sexy first scene with a few details, Miss Parker's lips, the vanilla scent, the taste of her wine... I can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: middleman Signed [Report This]Date: 20/10/08 09:11 pm
This is really great, Please update soon. i can't wait to see where you'll take this. Great character deveopment by the way.
Reviewer: Shadow Anonymous [Report This]Date: 12/09/08 05:09 am
Gah! What a place to leave us hanging!!
More, pretty please?
Reviewer: Taryn Anonymous [Report This]Date: 08/09/08 05:38 am
I loved it! I can totally see this story being a pretender episode or movie! Keep it up, when are you expecting to have a new chapter out?
Author's Response:
Hi Christy!
Thanks for your review. I have a lot of work to do at the moment, but I'll start working on the next chapter over the weekend... Hopefully I'll have it out by Sunday. :)
Cheers,
Shannon
Reviewer: Kristy Anonymous [Report This]Date: 18/08/08 12:15 am
Keep Going! YOu have me in suspense! I love it!
Reviewer: dark angel Anonymous [Report This]Date: 17/08/08 03:29 pm
