Oooh yes, yes! It's always a blast when Mr. Cox joins the party and even more fun when that party takes place at the T board. Yay! And oh, Jarod- blue notebook? Oh wow and oooh, nice exchange between Parker and Cox.

Miss Parker as a hissing dragon? Nice! Also, I like the concern that slips from her and I loved the twin's confortation but I am just a little bit afraid for her now.

Oh my god! Alex? I didn't see that one coming but hmm, very plausible that he would have been found by the Centre, re-educated and that Lyle would try again to "flock" with him, haha.

Ooh, just like Parker to make the play of having Syd's phone bugged. I love the tension brewing in this chapter!

Would be great to bring something like this back again. It's a very well thought out story.

Just finished chapter 10, and I'd just like to say that the bit about Jarod's room in his mind and his reprogramming of Lyle's reprogramming is brilliant. My favorite part of the whole story so far.

Also I love Sydney's characterization. 

Hey, what do you mean "There are no more chapters"? You can't just leave me hanging like this, it's not fair!

Anyway, as you could probably guess from my other reviews: I loved the story and I hope that you'll find the time to finish it one day.

Thanks for sharing!

See, you're a day late in posting and I'm a day late in reviewing, I'd say we're even now ;)

Great chapter as usual. I liked Cox's thoughts on Lyle and Miss Parker. And Miss Parker's and Lyle's conversation was spot-on.

I'm looking forward to the next chapter! 

The interaction between Parker and Lyle is great, they are both so in character. Jarod's bouncing is hilarious.

Poor Emily really does seem to be having a bad hair day, though ;) And then to be stuck in a car with a mightly nervous Broots...

There's one thing that I don't understand in this chapter, though: How does the first part from Jarod's POV fit together with the rest of the chapter that starts with MP's POV?

Wow you've really outdone yourself Manoline! You almost completely stole the show in this installment with your uncanny knack for writing Broots and Emily... and only almost because Washaza's take on Lyle in the car was so awesome...

And Yay more of Jacci's Mr Cox too!

Can't wait for the next chapter guys, as always, this piece simply cannot disappoint!! 

You kick butt, Emily! Poor Broots is close to a nervous breakdown, but I loved the description of him. And the exchange between Lyle and MP was great, so in character. Thanks for the update!

Author's Response: Yes poor poor little Brootsie *pets the nervous fellow*. Thanks for another review

- Manoline 

Good chapter, things are picking up a bit. the story remains well put together, I remain impressed by the fact that so many of you wrote it and worked it into one seamless -suspenseful and well written piece.

Nicely done. Cudos to your editor, and to all you writers.

Author's Response: Well thank you Nightowl. But just to clarify, we don't have an editor. I mean I suppose since I add the color to the text I do edit the text, but I don't touch the literary content (except for my own, just can't help myself there every once in a while). So with the exception of a few "self edits", this is all exactly how we wrote it about a year ago (reason for the "chapterization" is so it doesn't look so unbelievably huge for me to code in).

- M