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Title: Chapter 28

Fantastic job with Jarod's psychological deterioration- it's always been a possibility and you ladies certainly have me convinced. I think I like him better this way, haha, much less cocky this way. Nice. I'm loving the way Emily and Alex work so well together and again, poor Broots. I hope the guy will get a break soon.

Reviewer: Mirage Signed [Report This]
Date: 25/06/11 12:35 am
Title: Chapter 28

Poor Broots, he deserves a big hug for what you're making him go through ;)
I would feel sorry for Cox being stuck with child!Jarod, but he brought it all on himself. 

I'm curious to see if Alex's plan works and what he's really up to. Somehow I can't see him cooperate with Emily to actually free Jarod.

So, I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter (although it may be a few days before I have internet access again).

Author's Response:

Alex cooperate? Nah, it might sound a littlebit too good to be true perhaps.

*gives Brootsie that big hug he's been waiting for*

- Manoline 

Reviewer: Cathy Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 29/08/08 09:28 pm
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