A very unique way to tell a story, not only by the number of authors but also the colored text.
The story itself is an interesting idea, and one that would have made a good episode.
I had put of reading this thinking the weekend would be good but as the chapters grew decided NOW was as good a time as any! I'm glad I read it tonight. I find I rely less on TV for entertainment and more on fanfiction lately, this is a good example as to why.
I have a feeling you have something big coming up and I look forward to whatever it is you have in mind.
I'm glad you decided to give our *ahem* 'little' story a chance, the number of chapters alone must seem pretty daunting.
Interesting that you should mention television. The reason I (well, try to at least. In my defense I am on summer vacation, hard to keep track of time. Poor little me and all my free time *grins*) post chapters on previously notified dates is to in a way model after how tv episodes air on a certain time and day, which ensures that people "tune in" who may have otherwise not.
Something big coming up *looks innocent and unknowledgeable* whatever do you mean?
Stay tuned Buck, glad to have you onboardReviewer: Bucky LaFontaine Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 24/07/08 04:29 am
Another seamless chapter. Very well done.
I especially enjoyed Broots comments, they had me chuckling as I read. They were so Broots and so well timed and written. Just as the series used dark humor and wit even when the theme was a dark usually by comments from Miss Parker or Broots, you managed to do the same. Broots out did himself iwth this.
I hope Parker doesn't really deliver Jarod. She has shown herself to have layers beyond the surface. As a red file I always figured she had more than they gave her credit for, and perhaps her life at the Centre was one big pretend. That's just my take. I'm looking forward to see how you work this out.
Good job everyone. A very enjoyable chapter the whole way through.
Author's Response: Aw, you've got me positively beaming here nightowl. Thanks a bunch! As a writer who tends to block every time I get close to writing utensils, Broots was a lot of fun to do as I never really had to force it.
Interesting theory as far as Parker goes. Wonder if it'll come true, hmmm...
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Date: 23/07/08 07:53 pm
"King of Roadkill"? I love it!
The interaction between Jarod and Miss Parker is great and I am highly amused by Broots' attempts to talk himself out of the cell.
And thank you for saving Sydney ;-)
Oh yes, Syd is out of the woods...for now! Muhahaha. Wait a sec, if Brootsie is with Syd that means...oh no!
Guess you'll just have to wait and see...
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Date: 23/07/08 07:37 pm