Has Alex seen the err of his ways? I'm beginning to question his loyalties but it makes perfect sense that he'd realized (after Jarod tried again to keep him from falling in TP2001) that the Centre had been using him and Jarod and Kyle and Lyle and Miss Parker and pitting them against each other so they'd be too busy hating each other to wake up, combine their genius minds and topple the PTB's. A crazy thought. I can't wait to find out what happens next and I love the Parker/Jarod, hunted/hunter rigmarole. Fantastic!
Date: 24/06/11 10:51 pm
Has Alex seen the err of his ways? I'm beginning to question his loyalties but it makes perfect sense that he'd realized (after Jarod tried again to keep him from falling in TP2001) that the Centre had been using him and Jarod and Kyle and Lyle and Miss Parker and pitting them against each other so they'd be too busy hating each other to wake up, combine their genius minds and topple the PTB's. A crazy thought. I can't wait to find out what happens next and I love the Parker/Jarod, hunted/hunter rigmarole. Fantastic!
Reviewer: Mirage Signed [Report This]Date: 24/06/11 10:51 pm
I still think it is amazingly seamless considering how many of you are writing this. Great work.
So Jarod is going to have a temper tantrum and what is Miss Parker really doing? everyone thinkis it is Jarod that is always underestimated, I have always thought it was Miss Parker. I love it when she pulls one out on everyone. The question is --will she do it here?
Good work, interesting plot and again... seamless!!
Author's Response:
Interesting point about miss Parker being underestimated, never thought about it like that before, but very true non the less.
Nice to hear the many, many seams are still not blatantly obvious ;)
Reviewer: nightowl Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 18/07/08 04:00 am
Alex really is a nasty piece of work. But I'm curious now: What secret does he know - or pretend to know?
And Jarod: Can you say infantile much ;)?
Great chapter as usual. Thanks!
Author's Response:
Not more curious than Emily is...
Thanks for another great review
Reviewer: Cathy Signed
[Report This]Date: 17/07/08 11:39 am
