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Title: Chapter 5

Miss Parker as a hissing dragon? Nice! Also, I like the concern that slips from her and I loved the twin's confortation but I am just a little bit afraid for her now.

Reviewer: Mirage Signed [Report This]
Date: 24/06/11 09:05 pm
Title: Chapter 5

It's really amazing how you can all get into the different characters so well.

T-Board? Never a good thing. Now I'm definitely looking forward to the next chapter. 



Author's Response:

T-Board: Bad for sanity, great for plots

Thanks for the lovely review

- Manoline 

Reviewer: Cathy Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/06/08 07:10 am
Title: Chapter 5

Well, things certainly don't look good for our three. Lyle does do the villian so well, the only character that plays the part better is Raines!

 

Hopefully Parker will gather her wits and get them out of that position. I love it when she gets Lyle by surprise and srings him up by his only thunb!

 

Nice seamless chapter. Great job as a group .



Author's Response:

Yes Lyle is a real meanie (great job Whashaza!) luckily for him my Broots will have Sydney to lean on for emotional support....or does he? Hmm....

Thanks again for a lovely review, hope you like the new chapter

- Manoline 

Reviewer: nightowl Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/06/08 08:02 pm
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