Nice. Love Brootsie's ohmygoshohmygosh, haha and it's always good to see Syd getting a little hot under the collar, not to mention a very agitated Miss Parker- very characteristic of her. And Jarod under Lyle's complete control? *shudders* Can't wait to click next.
Reviewer: Mirage Signed [Report This]Date: 24/06/11 08:55 pm
This is not just a little suspenseful, but in so many ways down right creepy.
Come on Parker!! to the rescue!
Well written, again seamless in the way you melded the different writer's work together. Great editing or just plain great team writing.
Author's Response:
Yes, it is somewhat creepy. And with the intruduction of Alex... do I need to say more?
Thanks again for the review
- Manoline
Reviewer: nightowl Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 04/06/08 09:20 pm
Whashaza, do you know how scary it is to see how well you can get into Lyle's head ;-)
Great chapter, especially the characterisation of Broots. I'm curious to see who sent Syd the address and what's going to happen to him.
Thanks for sharing.
Author's Response:
uhm....I'll take that as a compliment. ;-) Thanks, hubby do tend to get worried when I start tucking at an imaginary glove while chuckling quietly to myself. ;P
Sarah did a great job playing Broots. Love her scenes. Thanks for the review.
Whashaza
Reviewer: Cathy Signed
[Report This]Date: 04/06/08 07:19 pm
