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Title: Chapter 2

Ooh, just like Parker to make the play of having Syd's phone bugged. I love the tension brewing in this chapter!

Reviewer: Mirage Signed [Report This]
Date: 24/06/11 08:41 pm
Title: Chapter 2

Ooh, just like Parker to make the play of having Syd's phone bugged. I love the tension brewing in this chapter!

 Reviewer: Mirage Signed [Report This]
Date: 24/06/11 08:41 pm
Title: Chapter 2

An interesting and difficult writing experience,but I think you made it work! The first two chapters are seamless, if you hadn't explained the experience i know I wouldn't have guessed it was written by so many people.

Well done.

Now... I hope Parker lets up a bit on Jarod, and goes after Lyle! He does do the bad guy so well doesn't he! and you did a great job capturing that, through the other character's insights.

Good job to all involved. I look forward to seeing more of this story!

Thanks for your hard work and creative spirit. 



Author's Response:

Oh yes, interesting is definitively the word. But I don't mean it in a bad way, it was just very different from how at least I was used to approaching writing and it took a little while to get used to. But then we just clicked. This way of writing definitively have its advantages. Like when you have no idea how to move the story forward, suddenly one of your lovely cowriters has completely changed everything around and you know exactly what to do next. And it keeps you on your toes, the story never takes the direction you thought it would (unless you've conspired with a few of your fellow writers, but even then theres no guarantee). But for anyone looking for a fun and exciting challenge, I would definitively recomend it.

Thanks for the review!

- Manoline 

 

 

 Reviewer: nightowl Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27/05/08 03:25 am
Title: Chapter 2

Great story, i can't wait to see what happens next! :)

Author's Response: Well you've have plenty of opertunities to do just that. There are many, many MANY more chapters to go.

- Manoline 

 Reviewer: Maria Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 26/05/08 03:23 pm
Title: Chapter 2

Why am I not surprised that Lyle is involved in whatever is going on?

But I really do not want to be in either Broots' or Parker's place when Sydney finds out about the bug.

Anyway, nice chapter and great characterizations. I'm curious to see what's coming next.



Author's Response:

Yeah, Lyle is quite a mischievous little guy.

And thanks for the compliment about characteriztion. It's a little scary at first, only deciding what one character does, but it is a great oppertunity to sort of "get into the head" of that one character.
 
- Manoline 

 Reviewer: Cathy Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/05/08 11:13 am
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