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Title: Amazing, Just Amazing...

Good story. Love it. Interesting AU for the pretender. Can't wait until you post more. Please post more soon.

Reviewer: Ann Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24/04/08 01:28 am
Title: Strange And New World...

Still liking it. :)  I really enjoyed this Sydney and how he and Jarod find common ground in a love of books and learning.  I loved all the questions that young Jarod tossed at Sydney. Hee!  [Will Jarod take it upon himself to teach young Miss Parker?]

 More, please. :)

Reviewer: wormie Signed [Report This]
Date: 23/04/08 08:04 am
Title: Amazing, Just Amazing...

This chapter was well done, in the way you captured Sydney is just as I expect Syd would have been in that age.  Jarod, as a young boy dying to learn and yet battered and bruised already because of his nature is hard to see; but most likely what would have happened back in those times.

 

I am truly loving this story. History has always been a favorite subject so this attempt at moving the characters back in time and keeping them as true to the characters as orignally written  is a brave and imaginative piece of creativity. Well done. 

 

Too bad I can't give you more than a 10 for a rating.  ;-) 

Reviewer: nightowl Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/04/08 05:12 am
Title: Amazing, Just Amazing...

You guys have a wonderful story! I can't wait for the next chapter! Very interesting time period and interpretation of what would happen in this time period. Is Angelo going to make an appearance, and will Jarod teach Miss Parker about things she does not know about? There are so many directions you can go with this! I suspect bad things with the Duke and how he will use Jarod. I love the interactions between Miss Parker and Jarod and hope you will have more of those in the next chapter.

Reviewer: anamchara Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21/04/08 08:13 pm
Title: Strange And New World...

I love it.. love it LOVE it :)

 

I remember seeing the small seedling of this story, and i love how it has developed. It works so so well, and i will look forward to see how further Centre characters make their apperance.. mostly Broots :) 

Reviewer: KatieQ Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 20/04/08 05:33 pm
Title: Strange And New World...

Just great !!

Reviewer: Georgia Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18/04/08 12:47 am
Title: Strange And New World...

You know, this would make a wonderful challenge, to do a Pretender in another time. Making each character fit in as that character would.. or wouldn't as the case may be. 

 

It would be a wonderful excuse to play with everyone's favorite time in history, and for us readers think how much fun it would be to see!  

Reviewer: nightowl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 17/04/08 11:31 pm
Title: Strange And New World...

I loved it. Very imaginative and creative. I love alternate universe pieces! there are so many new and interesting directions to take them.

 Seeing the characters in this one is certianly unusual. I figured Sydney would be a tutor of some sort, but can't imagine Parker one not learning Latin and 5 or 6 other languages, She certainly had Lyle beat when it came to IQ and Wit. 

 I can't wait to see where you go with this. I know Parker is not going to sit back and behave, but have to wonder when we see Lyle start to go off the deep end... or maybe he doesn't here, since so far Raines hasn't gotten his twisted fingers on him. 

 

hmmm wonder what Raines was, the village idiot or maybe Merlin gone bad.  And Broots now he would have been the village inventor!  It's fun just to guess where they would have been.

 

Thank you for a delightful tale. 



Author's Response:

Thanks nightowl, im glad you like it. Yeah, i do like the AU pieces too, you can go into so many other directions and I'm happy you are lovig it so far! As for the characters, we have tired to keep them in their roles as much as possible, so yes Syd is the mentor in this one too. The thing with Parker though, this is the 15th c, it wasnt allwoed for woman to read and write back then, so she as smart and bright as she is, she can not do it, so we just have to wait and see how Parker goes in the story lol. Again, i am so glad you like this and hope you like the coming chapters!! 

Reviewer: nightowl Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17/04/08 04:10 am
Title: Strange And New World...

I love this story! I have never read an AU pretender story like this before! In a strange way it works! I love the adventurous, little Miss Parker. Are you going to take this story into Jarod and Miss Parker's adulthood? And are the circle of stones that Jarod liked to go to Stonehenge? Just curious;) Awaiting the next chapter!!

Author's Response: Thanks anamchara!! glad you love it. This fic was one of our lovley jacci's ideas and it turned out well. as for where we take it and how far into their lives, well then, you just have to wait and see lol. As for the stone circle, that does come up a few times in the story, yes it is StoneHenge (Always thought it was in scotland lol, nope, england! lol)

Reviewer: anamchara Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16/04/08 06:40 pm
Title: Strange And New World...

Honestly, at first i was a little worried. It was so much AU and I feared that you might not be able to pull it of. But I'm very happy to say I was wrong.

Really like this story and I'm curios of what will happen next.  And poor Parker, being forced to wear dresses when all you want is to run outside and play is awful.

Well done!

Author's Response:

I'm glad we could prove you wrong with this story lol. We have tried to keep as much to the shwo as possible with in our limits of a completly differnt time.

Yay for you liking it too! As for Parker, it is just very awful, so very evil, that she has to wear dresses lol 

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 16/04/08 06:23 pm
Title: Strange And New World...

love it!  more soon?

Author's Response: Hey wormie, glad you like it and yes, there will be more soon lol

Reviewer: wormie Signed [Report This]
Date: 16/04/08 05:28 pm
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