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Title: Chapter 5

Nice to see you explained the mystery of why Jarod was co-operating.  Now it seems more finished.

Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29/10/07 05:49 pm
Title: Newspaper

Good story and very suspensefull!  But the ending leaves the reader with a strange feeling, almost as if it's not really the ending.  You need to add another chapter to answer the question of what Raines did to Jarod, why Sydney needs to know and finish it off.

 

Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30/09/07 06:19 pm
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