Title: Chapter 1

wow!!! NNNIIIICE job. that was truly lovely.

Reviewer: CrackerjacknPez Signed [Report This]
Date: 31/08/07 10:46 pm
Title: Chapter 1

I have never read a more beautiful story than I have right now.  Wonderfully written.  As you told Debbie's story, I could picture it as if she was right in front of me in my living room acting out the scenes you've created.  I love the memories of the precious time Miss Parker and Debbie had with each other, and you replayed it PERFECTLY!  Thank you so much for sharing!

Anna 

Reviewer: AJeff Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/08/07 03:43 am
Title: Chapter 1

Great story!  Took me a while to figure out who was 'talking'.  Loved it! 

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Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21/08/07 05:50 pm
Title: Chapter 1

That was so sweet!

 

It made me cry!

 

I'm so proud of Parker and Debbie ...

 

But it's a shame that Parker died so young ...

 

THX 

Reviewer: Thara Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21/08/07 01:06 pm
Title: Chapter 1

So sad and beautiful at the same time. Loved it!

Reviewer: Cathy Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 21/08/07 08:59 am
Title: Chapter 1

Gave me goosebumps... Very nice story :^)

Reviewer: krisrussel Signed [Report This]
Date: 21/08/07 07:52 am
Title: Chapter 1

beautiful! just beautiful.

you made me cry like a little girl and, trust me, that's a really hard thing to do :o) if i coul, i'd rate you 100...

keep on those chapters coming. can't wait to read more.

peace! 

Reviewer: Jazzy Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21/08/07 07:17 am


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