"Sydney even suspected—though he was sure that Parker would never admit to this—that her decision to sedate Jarod had been an act of mercy meant to spare him a few hours of Lyle’s depravity before returning to the Centre." ---> Most definately must be it! =)
I'm on the edge of my seat over here.Reviewer: Danielle SmileyFace Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/03/10 05:24 am
ohh syd! what an outburst. tisk tisk tisk, better control that temper if you want to work with Jarod i would imagine lol. great work, keep it up and off to read chap three
Yes, Syd does have a tendency to ruffle feathers that way . . .
Glad you're still enjoying it! Can you do me a favor and just shoot me an email once you've read the rest? Or just leave a review for chapter five, whichever comes easier.Reviewer: Onisius Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/11/07 09:42 pm
Very nice and well done. This chapter is thoughtfully written and very cleaverly crafted, a nice piece of intense and cliffhanging reading. Good luck on your next chapter and good luck with Sarah! You'll need it. (big smile)
Thanks, RaChell! And no, Sarah has not breathed fire through her emails. . .yet;)
Love ya, Sarah and RaChell!Reviewer: RaChell Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/08/07 11:37 am
Wow MP.. this just gets better and better! It was well written and i enjoyed the 'rare' glimpse into the political structure of the Centre. Looking very much forward to the next installment!
Author's Response: You're way too nice, Katie! Now my head's starting to swell (runs to get a beta to puncture swollen head) :) Thanks for the review, and I hope you keep reading (and writing.)
Date: 04/08/07 08:25 am
Wow. This chapter is incredible. Well done on the dialogue and setting the scene. So looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you like. Reviews like this keep me writing!
Date: 04/08/07 07:17 am