"Sydney even suspected—though he was sure that Parker would never admit to this—that her decision to sedate Jarod had been an act of mercy meant to spare him a few hours of Lyle’s depravity before returning to the Centre." ---> Most definately must be it! =)
I'm on the edge of my seat over here.
Reviewer: Danielle SmileyFace Signed [Report This]Date: 09/03/10 05:24 am
ohh syd! what an outburst. tisk tisk tisk, better control that temper if you want to work with Jarod i would imagine lol. great work, keep it up and off to read chap three
Author's Response:
Yes, Syd does have a tendency to ruffle feathers that way . . .
Glad you're still enjoying it! Can you do me a favor and just shoot me an email once you've read the rest? Or just leave a review for chapter five, whichever comes easier.
Reviewer: Onisius Signed [Report This]Date: 06/11/07 09:42 pm
I like!! I hope u intend to post more chapters soon...
Author's Response: I do indeedy! Hope u keep reading!
Date: 10/08/07 11:18 am
Great chapter. Centre politics are the best. Here's hoping Sydney and Miss Parker have something up their sleeves.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading, TLM! As for Syd and MP. . .all will be revealed in time:) Reviewer: TLM Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/08/07 01:40 pm
Very nice and well done. This chapter is thoughtfully written and very cleaverly crafted, a nice piece of intense and cliffhanging reading. Good luck on your next chapter and good luck with Sarah! You'll need it. (big smile)
Author's Response:
Thanks, RaChell! And no, Sarah has not breathed fire through her emails. . .yet;)
Love ya, Sarah and RaChell!
Reviewer: RaChell Signed [Report This]Date: 04/08/07 11:37 am
Wow MP.. this just gets better and better! It was well written and i enjoyed the 'rare' glimpse into the political structure of the Centre. Looking very much forward to the next installment!
Author's Response: You're way too nice, Katie! Now my head's starting to swell (runs to get a beta to puncture swollen head) :) Thanks for the review, and I hope you keep reading (and writing.)
Date: 04/08/07 08:25 am
Wow. This chapter is incredible. Well done on the dialogue and setting the scene. So looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you like. Reviews like this keep me writing!
Date: 04/08/07 07:17 am