I really enjoyed your fic. Good job, especially with this being your first! Never would have been able to tell. :) You did such a good job with keeping them in character. I can't wait to see what's in store for the sequel.
Twingirl10
Author's Response: Thank you! :) Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 23/07/07 09:10 pm
Nicely done and so in character too! I love the 'in control' Miss Parker who tries to think rationaly and the innocent fun loving side of Jarod who is so sponteous. Like the way you have Jarod's family responding to her (Miss P), esp. his mother. But best of all is Zoey ... can't stand her! Loved that part the best. Looking forward to seeing more of your story. Your Muse deserves chocolates and roses.
Edited to add: And I am impressed with the way you have worked the scrolls and prophcies (sp?) into the story. I'm curious what direction you are going in with that.
Oh yes one more thing. Nicely done with Miss Parker's pregancey, I really dislike (hate is more the word for it) stories in which she is pregnant or she and Jarod have kids but this is one of the few exceptions. You've been able to carry this off extermely well and I don't mind it at all. And that in it's self is saying a lot!
Author's Response: Hi, RaChell. Thanks for the wonderful comments. Glad I could win you over with the pregnancy thing een though you don't normally like it. :) I'm a little unsure of where I'm going with the scrolls and all that, too, which is why I decided to make this story a two parter, so I could take some time and think about it. Thanks again! Reviewer: RaChell Signed
[Report This]Date: 23/07/07 04:22 pm
