This is good. I can't wait to see what comes next! Considering Jarod's time at the Centre, Simone's captivity away from Lyle is justfiable. I still can't believe he's turned good in this storyline. It's tough to write in character depth while moving the story along, but which ever direction this continues in it should be interesting. Having Emily be similar to Parker when it comes to taking action is always a good read. A lot of other stories have this and it's just funny and a great change in sibling tag team adventure.

I just found this sight a few days ago. I spent 1 whole evening reading your story. It is great. I don't know what you plan next, but you are very good at writing. I look forward to the rest of the story.