Title: Chapter 1

Hey Rachell!

 

You did such a splendid job with his!! I can't wait to see how it's going to be continued.. see we told you would do and kick ass!! :P 



Author's Response:

Thank you very much KaiteQ!  I'm glad you enjoyed it. Believe me this was a tough challenge, but Sarah kept me in line and with threats from Jacs re: the word limit, I was really sweating it.

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Reviewer: KatieQ Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/07/07 07:40 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Looking good RaChell, looking good. Especially like Lyle's little rant about viruses.

So who's gonna grab the next chapter? 



Author's Response:

Thank you!  Glad you enjoyed Lyle.  That's quite a compliment coming from my beta reader.  Now you can stop beating me with that foam pointy stick of yours.  (smiling) 

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Reviewer: Manoline Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30/06/07 03:47 am
Title: Chapter 1

Mr. Parker really is "Father of the Year" material, isn't he? Nice chapter, you kept them wonderfully in character, esp. Mr Parker and Raines.

So, who's doing the next chapter? 



Author's Response:

Oh I like that Cathy!  "Father of the Year!"  Glad you enjoyed it and thanks for the compliments re: staying in character.

Don't know who is doing the next chapter but it isn't me!  I was poked, bullied and etc into doing this one!  And then Jacs wanted to play Lyle and take a finger or toe for every 100 words I was over.

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Reviewer: Cathy Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 30/06/07 12:00 am
Title: Chapter 1

Hi RaChell!

This was really good.  Poor Miss Parker, can't she see what kind of person "daddy" is?

Well done!

Anna



Author's Response:

Thank you Anna!  I'm glad you enjoyed it, esp. the part re: Daddy Parker.  I tried very hard to keep him 'in character'.  (grin)

Sooo when will we see another story from you? 

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Reviewer: AJeff Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29/06/07 10:21 pm


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