You did such a splendid job with his!! I can't wait to see how it's going to be continued.. see we told you would do and kick ass!! :P
Thank you very much KaiteQ! I'm glad you enjoyed it. Believe me this was a tough challenge, but Sarah kept me in line and with threats from Jacs re: the word limit, I was really sweating it.
Reviewer: KatieQ Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/07/07 07:40 pm
Looking good RaChell, looking good. Especially like Lyle's little rant about viruses.
So who's gonna grab the next chapter?
Thank you! Glad you enjoyed Lyle. That's quite a compliment coming from my beta reader. Now you can stop beating me with that foam pointy stick of yours. (smiling)
OK so who is next?Reviewer: Manoline Signed [Report This]
Date: 30/06/07 03:47 am
Mr. Parker really is "Father of the Year" material, isn't he? Nice chapter, you kept them wonderfully in character, esp. Mr Parker and Raines.
So, who's doing the next chapter?
Oh I like that Cathy! "Father of the Year!" Glad you enjoyed it and thanks for the compliments re: staying in character.
Don't know who is doing the next chapter but it isn't me! I was poked, bullied and etc into doing this one! And then Jacs wanted to play Lyle and take a finger or toe for every 100 words I was over.
Reviewer: Cathy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 30/06/07 12:00 am
This was really good. Poor Miss Parker, can't she see what kind of person "daddy" is?
Thank you Anna! I'm glad you enjoyed it, esp. the part re: Daddy Parker. I tried very hard to keep him 'in character'. (grin)
Sooo when will we see another story from you?
Reviewer: AJeff Signed [Report This]
Date: 29/06/07 10:21 pm