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Title: Chapter 1

Hi just read your story it was good.

Reviewer: Katescats Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/09/14 06:40 am
Title: Chapter 1

Though I don't like the idea of Miss Parker dying, it was beautifully done and brought so much emotion in such few words.  Very sad, very well done.

Author's Response:

Hi Skyline!

Thank you very much for reading and reviewing my little oneshot. Greatly appreciated.

 I see that you've just joined this wonderful site.  Welcome aboard.

Anna 

 

Reviewer: Skyline Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 10/06/08 04:50 am
Title: Chapter 1

Nice short story.

Author's Response:

Hi Gena!

Thank you so much.

Anna 

Reviewer: Gena Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 29/06/07 05:45 pm
Title: Chapter 1

That was so sad! But beautifully written anyway. Thanks for sharing.

Author's Response:

Hello, Again!

Thank you so very much.

Anna 

Reviewer: Cathy Signed [Report This]
Date: 26/06/07 08:14 am
Title: Chapter 1

Oh, my ... that brought tears to my eyes, Anna!

 

*sniffs*

 

THX!!! 



Author's Response:

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Hi Thara!

Thank you so much.  Sorry, to have made you cry.

Anna 

Reviewer: Thara Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25/06/07 10:54 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Yes I love it Anna! Now tell me, how will you write a sequel to this?????

PS I read your other story before you so hastly pulled it away.  What is this?  Are you in a sad mood today?  I'm surrpised at the flood of angst and pain your 2 stories have. 



Author's Response:

Hi RaChelle!

I had to do minor corrections.  "Before You Say goodbye" is up now.  And no, I'm not in a sad mood.  I just love writing "angst".

 Anna

Reviewer: RaChell Signed [Report This]
Date: 25/06/07 06:48 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Oh Anna!  You've out done yourself this time.  This is so sweet and sad.  Do I love it?  Of course I do!  Beautifully done and you can can see Jarod's face thru the whole story. And of course you get ten gold stars for this one.   Very nice.  I did say I say I loved it didn't I?

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Author's Response:

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Hello RaChelle!

I guess we're both busy at Missing Pieces today!  A great big THANK YOU for your wonderful review.  You love it?  Thank you so much for your kind words!  

Anna 

Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25/06/07 06:20 pm
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