did you ever finish this story? if so, where? if not, why not? it's really hot!
Reviewer: jarod Anonymous [Report This]Date: 17/01/11 04:04 am
I recently read something on fanfiction.net, where you have an account, - not a fic, because I think you said you hadn't written one on ff.net, but you had written this one on Missing Pieces. The problem is, I cannot remember the name you used. Anyway, I've read two chapters of this fic - I haven't read the third yet - and I think you've done a good job style-wise. Constructive critisism-wise, the only thing I would point out is that some of the words are spelled incorrectly, for instance: jet/yet, sighted/sighed, and where/were. On the whole, it is a good start for your first fan fic (though I am not really a Jarod/Miss Parker shipper).
planet p
Author's Response:
I didn't post the fic on fanfiction.net, because I read the story guidelines and didn't really know if it was allowed or not. The name I use there is MorganR.
Thanks for pointing out the mistakes, English is not my native language, so constructive critisism is always welcome. When I get around finishing the last chapter I'll re-read the whole story and fix the mistakes.
I don't think I'm a Jarod/Miss Parker shipper, or maby I'm, I don't know. I'm a little bit of everything. I write whatever come to mind.
Thanks for your review!
Reviewer: planet p Anonymous [Report This]Date: 15/03/08 11:46 am
Nice, verrry nice! But don't stop here!
Author's Response:
Thanks! I'm not stopping, I’m just kinda stuck, again. My muse isn’t very cooperative lately.
Reviewer: RaChell Signed
[Report This]Date: 28/10/07 10:44 pm
VERY nice! can't wait to read more :o)
peace!
Author's Response:
Patience is a virtue ;) :)
Reviewer: Jazzy Anonymous [Report This]Date: 23/10/07 07:23 am
good part. wonder whether Jarod's gonna have amnesia... update soon!
Author's Response: Maybe I’m going to disappoint you because Jarod isn’t going to have amnesia… to much of a cliché. I thought the slipping in the tub was too much of a cliché already, but I kinda needed it. You’ll see…
[Report This]Date: 22/10/07 03:06 am
I'm glad this was just a dream cause I couldn't imagine Jarod doing what is esentially a sexual assault
Reviewer: Vid Anonymous [Report This]Date: 22/10/07 02:58 am
I loved it!!
Reviewer: jacci Signed [Report This]Date: 23/06/07 07:37 am
Loved it. I liked how that you thought that she had woken up from the dream when Jarod called, but it turned out that she was dreaming that Jarod had called. Good story. Please continue.
Author's Response:
Thanks!
How the mind can play tricks on us!!!
An addition is in progress.
[Report This]Date: 19/06/07 11:44 am
Very good job!
I Want at least one more chapter or sequel!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
The idea for a new chapter is coming together, so be patient!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 19/06/07 04:35 am
wow! what a tease! this story rocks!
i just hope there will be a sequel soon and that it won't be just dreams and phone conversations but some real action :o)
great writing. hope to read more from you soon.
cheers!
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked it!
I wasn't going to write another chapter or sequel at first, but I got an idea a few moments ago...
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Jazzy Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 18/06/07 07:13 am
Oh that was great. I love the litte twist. You are so naughty.
Just love this line:
she would have attacked him like a wolf with rabies.
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! Thanks! Reviewer: jacs Signed [Report This]
Date: 18/06/07 05:12 am
Oh, I can understand her so perfectly! I just hate it when I wake up and ... Fortunately, most of the time, I can't remember what I've been dreaming ... ;-)
Good story!!!
THX
Author's Response:
I hate it to, when I'm having a good dream and someone ore something wakes me up. I remember most of my dreams, but most of the time they are too weird to tell.
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Thara Anonymous [Report This]Date: 17/06/07 10:52 pm
LMAO! This is too cute! I would have loved to be the person listening in on that conversation!
Author's Response: Thanks! I would have been so much fun! Reviewer: RaChell Signed
[Report This]Date: 17/06/07 02:39 pm
