I love this beginning, but it is only a beginning and I want to read more :( Please! :)
Very well written so far, well done!
Reviewer: Leonie1988 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 12/10/11 04:20 am
This is very good - have you any plans to add more chapters ? Really, really hope so !!!!! The story so far is very intriguing and it has certainly sparked my curiosity.
You have made such a good start! Excellent writing !
Please can we have some more ?
Author's Response: thanks Phoebe, there is always plans for more chaps, but they never seem to come. i have had the first faint stirrings of musings in many years now and i am hoping now i have actually posted something once again (and my beta reader is on a lets finish all this stuff kick that I might actually try and wrap some of these unfinished stories. Reviewer: Phoebe Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07/05/08 01:49 pm
I like....a lot. You captured Parker quite well in this chapter. I could visualise the whole scene with Lyle. Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: thanks whashaza, that means a lot to me as i struggle more with writing Parker than I do with anybody else. I just never feel i can get her right, or come up with the witty lines she always has.
Date: 20/06/07 01:41 am
Ignore the rantings of the crazy person... nothing is missing, except for maybe my brain.
Author's Response: Ahh, all is good then, maybe is a symptom of that 'my head is gone' issue ?
Date: 19/06/07 10:07 pm
*stammers and splutters* There's some missing!! The version you sent me doesn't end there *shakes head firmly* But you've also added some great additions since I last saw it. YAY YOU!!!!!
Excellent as always.
Am just left wondering where those last couple of paragraphs went.
Author's Response: Thanks!! I am left wondering too, lol, got no idea now what might be missing. Reviewer: Thunderchild Signed [Report This]
Date: 19/06/07 10:00 pm
Well, that is quite a twist! Interesting little story line there! Can't wait to see where this is going ... in fact, I'm almost afraid to think of the possiblities!
Author's Response: thanks RaChell, i can't wait to see where it is going either, cos right now i am a bit afraid to look Reviewer: RaChell Signed [Report This]
Date: 19/06/07 09:56 pm
Can't wait for the next chapter! Can't wait to find out what she is up to. My imagination is doing overtime.
Author's Response: thanks, glad you liked it, and keep that imagination of yours on a leash!!! lol
Date: 19/06/07 06:41 am