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Title: Decisions and Deals

I love this beginning, but it is only a beginning and I want to read more :( Please! :)

Very well written so far, well done!

Reviewer: Leonie1988 Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/10/11 04:20 am
Title: Decisions and Deals

This is very good - have you any plans to add more chapters ?  Really, really hope so !!!!!  The story so far is very intriguing and it has certainly sparked my curiosity.

You have made such a good start!  Excellent writing !

Please can we have some more ?



Author's Response: thanks Phoebe, there is always plans for more chaps, but they never seem to come. i have had the first faint stirrings of musings in many years now and i am hoping now i have actually posted something once again (and my beta reader is  on a lets finish all this stuff kick that I might actually try and wrap some of these unfinished stories.

Reviewer: Phoebe Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 07/05/08 01:49 pm
Title: Decisions and Deals

I like....a lot. You captured Parker quite well in this chapter. I could visualise the whole scene with Lyle. Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: thanks whashaza, that means a lot to me as i struggle more with writing Parker than I do with anybody else. I just never feel i can get her right, or come up with the witty lines she always has.

Reviewer: whashaza Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 20/06/07 01:41 am
Title: Decisions and Deals

Ignore the rantings of the crazy person... nothing is missing, except for maybe my brain.

Author's Response: Ahh, all is good then, maybe is a symptom of that 'my head is gone' issue ?

Reviewer: Thunderchild Signed [Report This]
Date: 19/06/07 10:07 pm
Title: Decisions and Deals

*stammers and splutters* There's some missing!! The version you sent me doesn't end there *shakes head firmly* But you've also added some great additions since I last saw it. YAY YOU!!!!!

Excellent as always.
Am just left wondering where those last couple of paragraphs went. 



Author's Response: Thanks!! I am left wondering too, lol, got no idea now what might be missing. 

Reviewer: Thunderchild Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19/06/07 10:00 pm
Title: Decisions and Deals

Well, that is quite a twist!  Interesting little story line there!  Can't wait to see where this is going ... in fact, I'm almost afraid to think of the possiblities! 

 



Author's Response: thanks RaChell, i can't wait to see where it is going either, cos right now i am a bit afraid to look

Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19/06/07 09:56 pm
Title: Decisions and Deals

Can't wait for the next chapter! Can't wait to find out what she is up to. My imagination is doing overtime.

Author's Response: thanks, glad you liked it, and keep that imagination of yours on a leash!!! lol 

Reviewer: Morgan Signed [Report This]
Date: 19/06/07 06:41 am
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