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Title: Chapter 11: On the Move Again

Oh awesome ending! Love how you're sort of retracing Jarod's steps with the swimming and all, just now he's got Sydney to help him out.

So will we get a chapter where he learns how to drive? 



Author's Response: I'll never tell, you will just have to wait to see what he learns next.  Think Sydney may reign him in a bit on the skydiving and the race car driving though.

Reviewer: Manoline Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21/02/08 10:47 am
Title: Chapter 11: On the Move Again

NEW CHAP!!!! (happy dance, happy dance, happy dance)

Glad you finally found a muse that cooperates with you.  Syd's reaction to the thought of the beach was classic.  He's just like any parent of an eight-year old.

Anyway, great writing, and hope there's more soon.  Otherwise, I may be checking out the holiday sales on cattle prods and foam pokers;)



Author's Response: Glad you liked it and could see that Jarod was growing up, just a couple of chapters ago he was 2, now he's 8.  If the holiday shopping is for my muse, then go ahead.  If the shopping is for me, then consider me on my knees begging for mercy.

Reviewer: MP Signed [Report This]
Date: 14/11/07 11:46 am
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