*grins* I just love this story. It's really quite impressive how you manage to keep "newly gotten out"-Jarod very much in character when he's dragging a parent with him.
And got to love Broots.
*waits excitedly for the next bat-chapter*
Reviewer: Manoline Signed [Report This]Date: 06/09/07 10:35 am
That was a very cute chapter! I like how you are starting to integrate Jarod's pretends into the AU story.. hope your muse finds you soon!
- K
Reviewer: KatieQ Anonymous [Report This]Date: 04/09/07 07:20 pm
Great! You paint their thoughts so well you can almost see the inner workings of Sydney and Jarod's mind. Bravo!
Reviewer: RaChell Signed [Report This]Date: 03/09/07 09:22 pm
Great chappie! I especially loved the Pinocchio line and the part about the PSP. Parker was spot on for her little bit. I'm anxious to see how long it takes Broots to put it together. It was nice to actually see one of his furry little friends:)
Anyway, hope you keep writing! I promise not to pester anymore. (for now;)
Reviewer: MP Signed [Report This]Date: 02/09/07 09:03 pm