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Title: Chapter 9: Uh, Oh Trouble

I've been enjoying this story for weeks, but just recently as I was looking over the reviews, I realized I forgot to write you one!  Shows you what my brain's been like lately:)

Anyway, I looove this story.  I'm a big time Sydney fan, so I love stories that put him in close contact with Jarod for extended periods of time.  Jarod is so complex in this story--he's like a little kid, but at the same time has a lot of emotional demons and hidden depth.  To tell you the truth, this was one of my influences when I started plotting my developing (slowly developing) fanfic, "Flight of Memory."

Anyway, just wanted to let you know how much I appreciate the piece, and how much I really, REALLY hope you post more.

Reviewer: MP Signed [Report This]
Date: 31/08/07 05:00 pm
Title: Chapter 9: Uh, Oh Trouble

ugh!! grr, now I have to wait some more! this is VERRRRRRRRY GOOD! it makes sense on several levels for j to be acting like that... and interesting how j's reaction to green veggies is the same as other kids, even tho ots for different reasons. (i wonder if SLM and CVS was thinking of the green veggie thing when they created the opt. nutrit. supplm.?)

Reviewer: CrackerjacknPez Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 24/07/07 08:03 am
Title: Chapter 9: Uh, Oh Trouble

It isn't easy being Jarod, is it? Oh well, at least he's eating his vegetables.

Anyway, you really do a great job showing the complexity of Jarod's mind and the hard time both he and Sydney would have with their relationship changing so drasticly in such a short time. 

Reviewer: Manoline Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21/07/07 01:42 am
Title: Chapter 9: Uh, Oh Trouble

I really like this story. It creates so many interesting scenarios. Looking forward to more.

Reviewer: whashaza Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 21/07/07 01:23 am
Title: Chapter 9: Uh, Oh Trouble

Just when I thought you couldn't make this sotry better I was wrong!  This is by far the best chapter yet.  You can almost see the whole thing play out like a movie in your mind's eye.  Well done and your Muse deserves chocolates and roses!

Oh yes, did I happen to mention I want more? (wink, wink)

 

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Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20/07/07 06:41 pm
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