I wonder if Kainda is Parker's child. Oh wow. Crazygood.
Reviewer: Teresa Anonymous [Report This]Date: 11/09/18 03:22 am
I'm still getting used to the incest. It's different...
Reviewer: Teresa Anonymous [Report This]Date: 11/09/18 03:18 am
So eerie that Sydney would say those words again to anyone but Jarod or his clone. Nice touch to a wonderful story.
Reviewer: Teresa Anonymous [Report This]Date: 11/09/18 03:13 am
A little weird... the incest but you write it well.
Reviewer: Teresa Anonymous [Report This]Date: 11/09/18 03:10 am
Oh no not Raines. Cripies.
Reviewer: Teresa Anonymous [Report This]Date: 11/09/18 03:07 am
Aww too said. "I miss Baruti." That poor girl. Kamau seems very kind.
Reviewer: Teresa Anonymous [Report This]Date: 11/09/18 03:04 am
Ooh I wonder why the file was censored. I'm so curious about this.
Reviewer: Teresa Anonymous [Report This]Date: 11/09/18 03:02 am
So intrigued to see how this will go.
Reviewer: Teresa Anonymous [Report This]Date: 11/09/18 03:01 am
Drat. This is incomplete. But I love it. I wish the rest was here.
Reviewer: Nadia Anonymous [Report This]Date: 22/08/18 10:37 pm
So I looked for the PretenderForsaken Data Annex you have in your chappie end notes but can't find it? This story is so wonderful. I'd love to read more from you. If you have a website please let me know.
Reviewer: Nadia Anonymous [Report This]Date: 22/08/18 10:34 pm
Karina is so sick for raping Lyle. Uhh is the girl hers and Lyle's? Omg. I hope not.
Reviewer: Nadia Anonymous [Report This]Date: 22/08/18 10:27 pm
Karina seems like bad trouble....
Reviewer: Nadia Anonymous [Report This]Date: 22/08/18 10:24 pm
Love the sex scenes. You write them so well.
Reviewer: Nadia Anonymous [Report This]Date: 22/08/18 10:21 pm
Oh I hope that child isn't a spawn of Parker and Jarod.
Reviewer: Nadia Anonymous [Report This]Date: 22/08/18 10:16 pm
lol I love how baffled Jarod is about Lyle. Bahahah he is going to freak.
Reviewer: Nadia Anonymous [Report This]Date: 22/08/18 10:14 pm
The little girl is quite observant. I love this fic.
Reviewer: Nadia Anonymous [Report This]Date: 22/08/18 10:13 pm
I hope Raines pays.
Reviewer: Nadia Anonymous [Report This]Date: 22/08/18 10:03 pm
Uhhh yes. I love how they are together.
Reviewer: Nadia Anonymous [Report This]Date: 22/08/18 10:00 pm
Ohh...I hope nothing bad happens to the little girl.
Reviewer: Nadia Anonymous [Report This]Date: 22/08/18 09:56 pm
Jarod is silly inn't e?
Reviewer: Nadia Anonymous [Report This]Date: 22/08/18 09:54 pm
I like the relationship between Cox and Kamau. So intriquing.
Reviewer: Nadia Anonymous [Report This]Date: 22/08/18 09:45 pm
Jarod is going to be surprised lol.
Reviewer: Nadia Anonymous [Report This]Date: 22/08/18 09:39 pm
Yep I definitely hate Raines.
Reviewer: Nadia Anonymous [Report This]Date: 22/08/18 09:38 pm
"Parker was his" love that best line eva!
Reviewer: Nadia Anonymous [Report This]Date: 22/08/18 09:36 pm
I am so torn. I like this good Cox. I never thought I'd like Cox. You made me like COX. Ok so that's a weird sentence and a bit naughty sounding. It's all your fault.
Reviewer: Nadia Anonymous [Report This]Date: 22/08/18 09:32 pm