Wait. I just noticed that this isn't complete. I think I'll wait for it. I already got invested in The Pretender series that isn't complete and another fan fic that isn't done yet too and it drives me nuts. I'll bookmark you. Please finish this.
Reviewer: Beka Anonymous [Report This]Date: 08/04/19 11:05 pm
It's so true about empaths. I'm one too. Love this.
Reviewer: Beka Anonymous [Report This]Date: 08/04/19 10:58 pm
Never considered Lyle hooking up with Parker but it works or at least works as well as Jarod and Parker or Jarod and Lyle or any other ship and at least isn't as kinky as Jarod and Sydney although I can see that too in the right circumstances as messed up as it would be. Terrific story here.
Reviewer: Beka Anonymous [Report This]Date: 08/04/19 10:56 pm
Ooh lovely. I hope the chapters lengthen soon. This is one I can settle down and read.
Reviewer: Beka Anonymous [Report This]Date: 08/04/19 10:46 pm
So well written. I love your writing and the questions posed. Plausible.
Reviewer: Beka Anonymous [Report This]Date: 08/04/19 10:45 pm
Fantastic start. I'm hooked.
Reviewer: Beka Anonymous [Report This]Date: 08/04/19 10:43 pm
OMG I have to go to sleep but I can't leave this yet.
Reviewer: Teresa Anonymous [Report This]Date: 11/09/18 05:37 am
Parker's reaction to Lyle murdering people is so cool.
Reviewer: Teresa Anonymous [Report This]Date: 11/09/18 05:35 am
Oh Love the tension.
Reviewer: Teresa Anonymous [Report This]Date: 11/09/18 05:23 am
OMG. I can't wait to find out more about this little girl.
Reviewer: Teresa Anonymous [Report This]Date: 11/09/18 05:22 am
Oh.. now it will be so complicated if Kainda is Jarod and Miss Parker's child..
Reviewer: Teresa Anonymous [Report This]Date: 11/09/18 05:19 am
I hope Lyle won't hurt her. I'm kind of getting into the twincest thing now.
Reviewer: Teresa Anonymous [Report This]Date: 11/09/18 05:17 am
OOh Lyle showing ownership.
Reviewer: Teresa Anonymous [Report This]Date: 11/09/18 05:16 am
Ok I'm officially crushing on Cox now and that's all your fault. He is so freaking gentle and sweet..
Reviewer: Teresa Anonymous [Report This]Date: 11/09/18 05:07 am
oh goody. Miss Parker getting all tingly. I still wonder if it's her baby.
Reviewer: Teresa Anonymous [Report This]Date: 11/09/18 05:02 am
Oooh Cox is so nice. I love this side of him. Well done.
Reviewer: Teresa Anonymous [Report This]Date: 11/09/18 04:52 am
So sweet the way Parker protects Lyle from others. She will do that when she wants to.
Reviewer: Teresa Anonymous [Report This]Date: 11/09/18 04:47 am
I still wonder if she's Parker's daughter.
Reviewer: Teresa Anonymous [Report This]Date: 11/09/18 04:46 am
Good job with Angelo. I'm really enjoying this.
Reviewer: Teresa Anonymous [Report This]Date: 11/09/18 04:40 am
But Lyle loves her. I don't believe he'll hurt her. I hope not. But I also hoped an admitted rapist who grabs women's you-know-what wouldn't be elected or installed to the white house by Putin... so what do I know? Hope kind of sucks.
Reviewer: Teresa Anonymous [Report This]Date: 11/09/18 03:55 am
Oh. My. God. Wow. That was scary.
Reviewer: Teresa Anonymous [Report This]Date: 11/09/18 03:35 am
Raines sure does try to rewrite history. Good job with all of this. It is well written.
Reviewer: Teresa Anonymous [Report This]Date: 11/09/18 03:32 am
Oh no! What is Raines doing to Lyle?
Reviewer: Teresa Anonymous [Report This]Date: 11/09/18 03:26 am