Hi just read your story it was very good.
Reviewer: Katescats Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 31/01/14 03:54 am
This was very sweet, thank you for sharing! ;)
Reviewer: missparker87 Signed
[Report This]Date: 23/10/12 12:08 pm
Oh that was so sweet. (sigh) Nice way to end it.
Author's Response:
Hi RaChell!
I'm glad you liked the ending. Thanks much!
Anna
Reviewer: RaChell Signed [Report This]Date: 30/05/07 06:25 pm
Wonderful story!
It's so good to know that she has just run away and that Lyle and "Daddy" are dead! ;-)
THX
Author's Response:
Hi Thara!
Thank you so much! They're finally a family!
Anna
Reviewer: Thara Anonymous [Report This]Date: 30/05/07 03:08 am
oh, the ending is so beautiful. well, the whole story is great.
it was a true pleasure reading this one.
hope to read more of your stories soon :o)
cheers!
Author's Response:
Hi Jazzy!
Thanks! I'm really happy you liked the ending. And yes, I will be posting more of my stories. Again, thank you.
Anna
Reviewer: Jazzy Anonymous [Report This]Date: 30/05/07 12:13 am
Oh this is really sweet Anna. Very tender and loving and I am moved by it, even tho' I can't see MP getting pregnant unless it's planned. She is too much a control freak (hair, clothes, attitude) that I don't believe she would ignore this area of her life.
And I am curious to see where you will take this and how she can carry her's and Jarod's child without the Centre interfering. After all she is just as much Centre property as Jarod is, she may have had a office and been able to leave the building for 'home', (a better 'cell'in reality), but she's on a short leash and I doubt they will willing let her go. Do I have a feeling that leash is about to get yanked?
Author's Response:
Hi RaChell!
Aww...thank you for your kind words. Update soon.
Anna
Reviewer: RaChell Signed [Report This]Date: 15/05/07 11:34 am
that's what i'm talking about ... you have to draw everything to men.
great chapter! it took like a few minutes for my smile to fade away, after reading it :o)
go on! go on! and don't make us wait to long :o)
cheers!
Author's Response:
Hi Jazzy!
Oh, I'm so glad I made you smile. Well, the next chapter will be soon. Thank you so much!
Anna
Reviewer: Jazzy Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 15/05/07 03:43 am
please go on!!! I can`t wait!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
HI Nadine!
Thank you so much for your great review! I'll be updating soon. Sometime this weekend.
Anna
Date: 12/05/07 07:04 am
Oh No! I have that funny feeling I know where this is going! Nice tho'!
Author's Response:
Hi RaChell!
Thanks! Hope you're enjoying this story. I'll update soon.
Anna
Reviewer: RaChell Signed [Report This]Date: 08/05/07 02:24 pm
oooohhh! a fight! i LOVE it.... and she's obviously pregnant, right.
more, more, more.....
Author's Response:
Hi Jazzy!
Yes, I'll have more. It'll be soon. Pregnant? How could you tell? (lol)
Anna
Reviewer: Jazzy Anonymous [Report This]Date: 08/05/07 12:21 am
More please!
Author's Response:
Hi Patricia_D!
Thanks. I should be updating real soon.
Anna
Reviewer: Patricia_D Signed [Report This]Date: 06/05/07 08:07 pm
Well???? That's it? You just leave us with the promise of chapter 4???? Mean person you! ;)
No, I really loved it and yes, I can see them fighting each other for control. You know, (laughing) I wouldn't want to place a bet on who wins. Very nice and yes, I expect you to post the next chapter soon!
Author's Response:
Hey RaChell!
Thank you. Chapter 4 will be coming up shortly.
Anna
Reviewer: RaChell Signed [Report This]Date: 30/04/07 09:45 am
Interesting story so far.
Author's Response:
Hi RaChell!
I should be updating soon. Thanks for reading!
Have a great day!
Anna
Reviewer: RaChell Signed [Report This]Date: 24/04/07 01:14 pm
i love this story. it's so.... sexy.... unlike a regular NC-18, this one has a certian flow... and that's really great.
and i hope there will be more than 3 chapters. keep it going :o)
can't wait for more :o)
Author's Response:
Hi Jazzy!
Thank you so much. I'm having fun writing this. Update will be soon. Please come back for more.
Anna
Reviewer: Jazzy Anonymous [Report This]Date: 24/04/07 01:18 am
