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Title: Chapter 1

I'm not a first name fan either, but this works much, MUCH better than any other name I've come across.  The entire story is excellent.  I know a writer is talented when they can take a premise I don't like (i.e. Parker's name) and write a story I do like.

 Reviewer: MP Signed [Report This]
Date: 16/09/07 04:00 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Nice and interesting.  While I don't care for writers giving MP a first name, I do like the story.

 Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/03/07 08:41 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Miss Parker's names, or lack of it, sum up so much of her personality, and so did you. And though I'm not a big fan of assigning her a first name I think you did it well.

 Reviewer: Manoline Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/03/07 06:05 am
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