Very funny story! =)
Reviewer: Danielle SmileyFace Signed [Report This]Date: 23/02/10 05:52 pm
Great short story, Sarah. Poor MP, stuck in a room with both a crying baby and Jarod. Surprised she didn't shoot at least one of the three. Thanks Tina And yes, they had a bit of a challenge to overcome there, was a challenge to write without a lot of gunfire (but then again, RaChell mostly took care of that :P ). Though personally I feel more for the poor writer. It's nice to know people are still reading my stories despite some lack of activity on my part.
Author's Response:
Date: 19/02/08 03:25 pm
Sweet! love the way her name changes.
Author's Response:
Thank you :)
Reviewer: Patricia_D Signed
[Report This]Date: 07/03/07 02:15 pm
Hahahahaha.. nice work manoline! It was super fabulous!! You and Rachell have done quite a nice job.. is there more to come? There better be!
Gave me a great laugh!!
Author's Response:
Thanks Katie.
And yes there is indeed more to come, RaChell is working on WB3 as we speak. And let me tell you, it is hilarious. Reviewer: KatieQ Signed [Report This]Date: 02/03/07 11:36 pm
LOL ... oh, normally, I hate writer's block ... but, ... u know ...
Author's Response: Oh I couldn't agree more with you. Writer's block is incredibly annoying. Happy to hear that didn't keep you from liking the story though :)
Date: 02/03/07 05:35 am
Wow! You really added to this since I last looked at it. I love the new lines, esp. "He began to hyperventilate and had to apply one of the breathing tecnices Sydney taught him as a child."
LOL! I can just see Jarod now! :) Great job!
Yes Cathy, I'm working on a chapter 3 however this is open for anyone who wants to join in. After the bashings our muses give us it's a chance to get back at them.
Author's Response:
Oh, thanks Ra :)
If there is one thing I have never been never capable of, it's reading one of my own stories without changing something, glad to see you think it was for the better.
Reviewer: RaChell Signed
[Report This]Date: 01/03/07 01:18 pm
I don't know who I feel more sorry for - Jarod and Miss Parker or the muse! Great sequel that has me in stitches. Thanks for sharing!
P.S. Will there be another chapter?
Author's Response:
Thanks Cathy :) Personally I feel more sorry for the writer, but that's mostly because I'm a little too much like her.
As for another chapter, I'm not sure. RaChell mentioned something about it, so if you want a sequel, give her a nudge.
[Report This]Date: 01/03/07 11:09 am
