Nicely done. Very intense. Great story line, very realistic and well thought out.
Why thank you so much, it all started with Jacs and her challange.
I do tend to go intense when writing and get sloppy with my spelling and stuff.
Glad this is readable and enjoyable at the same time.
Hugs~ArlsReviewer: RaChell Signed [Report This]
Date: 14/02/07 12:06 am
I just LOVE what you have done with this. It is completely awesome and the potential is now unlimited.... yay you
Ohhh lookie at all the fun toys here!! This is soo cools! Okay I am babbling...I am sooo happy to have kudos from a real Pretender Super Fan, wow that's sweet!
PS I couldn't resist the urge to keep Sleepyhead Alive!
PS x's 2 - Who's next?Reviewer: jaccione Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/02/07 09:26 pm