Cool story! Great writing and plotline. A definite series addition!Reviewer: electricq Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/05/10 11:13 pm
WHAT? No reviews for this at all? I loved your story. The characterizations were spot on. It had some fantastic dialogue and descriptions of the places and people. Your writing flows.
Sydney has always been my favourite of the show, and you played out his peril with beautiful subtleness. His conversation with Miss Parker in the room, with her agonizing over his execution and him keeping emotions in check, was perfect.
Your use of Broots and Angelo was equally enjoyable. Broots was typically well-meaning but out of his element, yet with Angelo to back him up, these two were a force to be reckoned. Broots' anonymous encounter with the gun-toting Miss Parker at the end was insightful and all sorts of entertaining.
Well done!Reviewer: Scipwraec Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 27/07/08 09:20 pm