see, P-D? here I am... oh, and I replied to both you and jacs, where u 2 amazed me w/ compliments! I am stunned, I truly am. (test story, ch 1)
I'm not too keen on sex-stories, but the plot, as well as the contemplating-thoughts of both of them, are great!
I AM a big JMP shipper, but I like how zoe uses her female intuition to figure out what's wrong, and it is a LITTLE refreshing to see J as more of a typical, out-of-it, sometimes-insensitive jerk of a guy that guys tend to be.
Zoe's a dork, but she's a nice dork who doesn't deserve how J's treating her. besides, its now her fault that's how the writers wrote her... and since he wants MP, he should just go to her and deal w/ that, rather than use Zoe to try and forget MP. she's not a thing.
*steps down from unexpectedly-appeared soapbox* oops... :-p sorry, that was NOT planned.. :-)
Author's Response: WOW! Thanks for the great review! That was unexpected and such a nice surprise! I'm glad you liked it. (blush!) Now when do we get another story from you?
Date: 16/08/07 09:21 am
Hey this is pretty good. I like Zoe in this and that's saying a lot because I didn't like her in the show. Great portrayal of her, and the confrontation of her and Jarod at the end...seemed just how Jarod would react.
Author's Response: Thanks Starbits! I'm so happy you enjoyed it. You made my day. :)
Date: 20/02/07 11:56 pm
I thought that was great. As a J/MP shipper I love these kinds of stories - particularly when they involve "dumping" on Zoe !! (I know, I'm mean !!). That said, this story feels like the first chapter in a much longer tale. I hope you decide to add additional chapters - it's too good to leave it there...
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the kind words. Yes I love to dump on Zoe too. :)
[Report This]Date: 05/02/07 03:07 pm
I love it... But I'd love to see a sequel ;)
Author's Response: Thank you Kris. Coming from a writer like you, that is quite a compliment! :) I'll have to see what I can come up with now that Jacs has updated Test Story!
[Report This]Date: 27/01/07 05:05 pm
Very good. I like the way you pictured all the feelings, just so light, I donīt know if it is the right word. I hope you will continue soon.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it. I'm not sure if there will be another part. But you never know!
Date: 27/01/07 04:12 pm
Wow, wow wow!!!! I just love how you took my humble story and invested it with such flair. Kudos!!!
I am also deeply honoured beyond my ability to express here, and touched, for reach the stars you did indeed.
So poignant and sad for poor Zoe, but how else could it possibly end for them? Surely there could never be any real hope for them?
Nicely done and I am just so tickled at your tribute :D
Author's Response: Thanks Jacs! That means a lot, esp. knowing you aren't a 'shipper. But your story was truly a inspiration and this is the result. I look forward to your next chapter. Maybe it will inspire me to continue with this story. :)
Date: 27/01/07 12:11 am
Poor Zoe(haha). Loved it. Continue por favor
Author's Response: I'm delighted you enjoyed it! Thank you for your kind comments, it really makes me feel like I accomplished what I wanted to.
Date: 26/01/07 11:13 pm
I seriously hope you are planning on continuing with this storyline, but it was fabulous on its own. Poor Zoe, we just can't give her and J a happy ending eh?
Thanks for sharing, and please share if this story or some other in the near future!
Author's Response: KatieQ, you're a talented writer and having read some of your stories, I am honored that you read this and enjoyed it. I'm not sure if there will be more to come but I'll have to take a wait and see approach. Thank you again for your review! Reviewer: KatieQ Signed [Report This]
Date: 26/01/07 06:45 pm
