Very good. I love it. You did a great job. I'm just happy I got a weapon. LOL
Nice to see you are writing again. I hope to see another one from you soon. (wink, wink)
Author's Response: Hmm, I suppose this is meant to butter me up so I'll finish the one I am doing for you huh? ;) Reviewer: Gena Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/01/07 09:50 pm
I might be a just a tiny bit bias, but I really liked the chapter. It's a long time since I've seen a tPfic about us writers. Though it's about time! (it's a nice way to keep 'em active) And I think you kept the writers pretty well ic. And that is difficult ;)
I can't help wondering...do we have the makings of another "Pretender Payback" on our hands?
Nice job, and I will be waiting for your next fic
Author's Response: Thanks Manoline. I'm glad you liked it and I really appreiciate you letting me use you in the story. As for another Pretender Payback...well I don't know. But it would be fun. :) Reviewer: Manoline Signed
[Report This]Date: 09/01/07 12:57 am
Minimalistic yet with lots of emotion. Obviously that chapter was not the literal turning point that one'd expect, but I am hoping there'll be much much more we can tune our not so innocent minds into.. ;)
Author's Response: Thanks Mira but I don't do smut or NC-17 well so you'll have to settle for this . And I think that the reader's imagination is quite capable of suppling their own fantasy. LOL!
Date: 08/01/07 07:09 am
Nice job. Your writing is clean and crisp. Nice description work which adds to the moment in time style. Can't wait for you to add to it.
Author's Response: Thanks Bucky. But for me to continue I need your input on chapter 3. LOL! :)
[Report This]Date: 27/12/06 09:24 pm
please continue.
Author's Response: Thanks Kelly, I'm glad you liked it and took the time to post a review. That means a lot.
[Report This]Date: 27/12/06 12:53 pm
yay rachell it looks great, the colour really makes it impressive, and i just love the U2 version of that song too, great first chapter.
Author's Response: I never could have done the color without you Jacs! I owe you. :)
[Report This]Date: 26/12/06 05:58 am
Great job ... I guess it expresses perfectly what they feel for each other and the way the Center stands in their way ... But it's a shame that they can't have a Merry Christmas ...
Author's Response: Thanks Thara. :)
[Report This]Date: 26/12/06 05:01 am
I like this story, it appeals to the shipper in me (she usually comes out around Christmas, so you're right on time). continue please
Author's Response: Being a shipper I just couldn't pass this one up. And I love your Christmas too.
[Report This]Date: 26/12/06 04:08 am
